- From: Ashok Malhotra <ashok.malhotra@oracle.com>
- Date: Fri, 21 Sep 2012 17:19:11 -0700
- To: David Booth <david@dbooth.org>
- CC: "www-tag@w3.org" <www-tag@w3.org>
Thanks, David! The abstract should cover what you are looking for but let's take a look and see if an additional Executive Summary would be beneficial. All the best, Ashok On 9/21/2012 3:03 PM, David Booth wrote: > This is a comment on > http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-publishing-linking-20120918/ > > I applaud the TAG and the authors/editors (Ashok Malhotra, Larry > Masinter, Jeni Tennison and Daniel Appelquist) for the work on this > document. I think this is a particularly difficult document to write, > but very important. Thank you! Although I have not read it in detail, > after skimming through it I do have one suggestion. > > How about putting an executive summary up front, with the key points in > simple, non-technical (or minimally technical) language? > > Since this document is intended "to inform future social and legal > discussions of the Web", and most of the people involved in such > discussions are likely to have minimal technical understanding of the > web (or willingness to understand it), I think such a summary could be > quite helpful. At present, the document reads very much like a > technical specification -- which on the one hand is unavoidable -- but I > cannot imagine policy makers, news reporters or others of mass influence > getting through it. > > Thanks! > >
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