- From: Tim Bray <tbray@textuality.com>
- Date: Mon, 29 Jul 2002 14:48:02 -0700
- To: www-tag@w3.org
Christopher B Ferris wrote: > Nit in section 1.1: "The representations of a resource may vary as a > function of factors including time, place, and the > identity of the agent accessing the representation" > > Seems to me that the agent accesses the 'resource' not the 'representation' Yep. > > Then, further in that paragraph it says: "The representations of this > resource depend on (at least) time, the expressed > preference of the user for Fahrenheit or Celsius, and the identity of the > user-agent software requesting the > representation.". > > which I do think is probably accurate. I think that one 'access a resource' > to 'retrieve a representation'. Changed it to "receiving the representation". > Then, in section 1.1.1.2: "On the other hand, the URN scheme [RFC 2141] > does not have a built-in dereference > mechanism, and does not guarantee that a dereference procedure is provided > for any given URN." > > What is a ' built-in' dereference mechanism? Built-in to what? Given that > work on DDDS[1] continues, I might offer > the following: > > On the other hand, the URN scheme [RFC 2141] does not yet have a > widely deployed dereference > mechanism, and does not guarantee that a dereference procedure > is provided for any given URN. Changed it to "... does not guarantee that a dereference procedure is defined..." Thanks, will republish soon. -Tim
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