[css-round-display] Miscellaneous suggestions

I finished reading today the most recent draft of the spec and it is really exciting to see how much it has matured since last year’s initial proposal: congrats to all the people involved!

This message is about some minor grammar/spelling fixes that I feel may be pending. The list follows below:

1) Missing periods on figure descriptions
In the specs I checked, there is always a period after the text describing a figure (e.g. Figure 1. Here goes the description.), but not on css-round-display. Maybe it is missing?

A patch with those fixes can be found at:
https://github.com/w3c/csswg-drafts/pull/59

2) Preposition use (except of -> except for)
On section 3.1, just past Figure 1, there is this period:
… This the same as the code above except *of* media queries …

It reads more naturally as:
… This the same as the code above except *for* media queries …

Fix at:
https://github.com/w3c/csswg-drafts/pull/60

3) Re-phrase a note
Still on section 3.1, past figure 2, there is a note that reads as:
… *If the shapes of displays are various*, such as polygons, we need to extend the media features more with additional parameters.

I think we could re-phrase it to:
… *For other shapes*, such as polygons, we need to extend the media features with additional parameters.

What you guys think? While at it, what is the preferred way of collaboration for this spec: writing here in the list or creating merge requests on github?


Best regards


Adenilson Cavalcanti