Re: [css3-break] ED 20130211 - minor editorial comments

Found a few more things...

On Sun, September 22, 2013 5:41 pm, Tony Graham wrote:
> Status of this document
>
> This section advises "[css3-break]", whereas "Feedback:" advises
> "[css-break]".  They were, however, consistent in advising "[css3-break]"
> in http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-css3-break-20120228/.
>
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> Section 1.2, "Values"
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> Does the double square brackets in "[[CSS3VALUE]]" denote anything?
>
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> Section 4, "Rules for Breaking"
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> In the first paragraph, there's a comma after "forced breaks" but not
> after "unforced breaks" in the following, parallel sentence.
>
>
> Section 4.3, "Forced breaks"
>
> "they combine such all types of break are honored" should be "they combine
> such that all types of breaks are honored".
>
> Also, either "Forced breaks" should be "Forced Breaks" to match the
> capitalisation of the other titles in the document or the other titles
> should be changed to be more consistent with other CSS specs.
>
>
> Section 5.1, "Breaking into Varying-size Fragmentainers"
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> "continuos" should be "continuous".
>
> "accross" should be "across".
>
> "remining" should be "remaining".
>
> Presumably "CSS 2.1 9.5" should be linked in the manner of "[CSS21]
> section 13.3" in section 1.1.
>
> In EXAMPLE 2, "a first page of 400px" probably should be "a first page
> height of 400px" to make it explicit that you're talking about heights.
>
> Similarly, uses of "size" in the EXAMPLE 2 bullet points should be
> "height".

or "page height".

In the fourth bullet point, the remaining progress percentage has gone
from 58.16% to 48.16%

Also, 246.9px is 41.84%, not 58.16% nor 48.16%, of 590px


> Section 5.4, "Transforms, Positioning, and Pagination"
>
> "a containing block fragment" initially reads as a noun (especially since
> there's "a transformed fragment" in the previous paragraph).  Perhaps it
> could be "a containing block will fragment"?
>
> Similarly with "box's content fragments" in the third paragraph, but I
> have no fix-up to suggest.
>
> Regards,
>
>
> Tony Graham                                   tgraham@mentea.net
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Received on Sunday, 22 September 2013 17:24:29 UTC