Re: [CSSWG][css-text-3] CSS3 Text Last Call Working Draft

Took the proposed changes for the section 4. Thank you for the feedback.

From: CE Whitehead <cewcathar@hotmail.com<mailto:cewcathar@hotmail.com>>
Date: Thursday, November 7, 2013 11:20 PM
To: fantasai <fantasai.lists@inkedblade.net<mailto:fantasai.lists@inkedblade.net>>, "www-style@w3.org<mailto:www-style@w3.org>" <www-style@w3.org<mailto:www-style@w3.org>>
Subject: [CSSWG][css-text-3] CSS3 Text Last Call Working Draft
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4. 1rst paragraph
" CSS white space processing allows the author to control interpretation of such formatting: to preserve or collapse it away when rendering the document."

{ COMMENT: I would not use a colon after "formatting" but rather would use a comma. }

=>
" CSS white space processing allows the author to control interpretation of such formatting, to preserve or collapse it away when rendering the document."

4. 3rd paragraph

"CSS does not define document segmentation rules. Segments could be separated by a particular newline seqence (such as a line feed or CRLF pair), or delimited by some other mechanism, such as the SGML RECORD-START and RECORD-END tokens. "

{ COMMENT: "could" is not the right tense in English; again use the habitual or scientific present of the verb; that is, use "can" here instead of "could."}

=>
"CSS does not define document segmentation rules. Segments can be separated by a particular newline seqence (such as a line feed or CRLF pair), or delimited by some other mechanism, such as the SGML RECORD-START and RECORD-END tokens. "