- From: Bert Bos <bert@w3.org>
- Date: Fri, 15 Nov 2002 06:36:26 +0100
- To: Etan Wexler <ewexler@stickdog.com>, www-style@w3.org
On Thursday 14 November 2002 12:27, Etan Wexler wrote: > Following are substantive comments on section 1, "About the CSS 2.1 > Specification" > (<http://www.w3.org/TR/2002/WD-CSS21-20020802/about.html>), of the > Cascading Style Sheets level 2.1 draft > (<http://www.w3.org/TR/2002/WD-CSS21-20020802>). > > > > 1.4.3 Shorthand properties > > > "Some properties are shorthand properties, meaning they allow authors > to specify the values of several properties with a single property." > > Change the final "property" to "declaration". OK > > > "For instance, the 'font' property is a shorthand property for > setting 'font-style', 'font-variant', 'font-weight', 'font-size', > 'line-height', and 'font-family' all at once." > > Add 'font-size-adjust' and 'font-stretch' to the list. No, there are no 'font-size-adjust' and 'font-stretch' in CSS 2.1. > > > "The multiple style rules of this example" > ... > "may be rewritten with a single shorthand property" > > Change to "The declarations in this example" and to "may be rewritten > with a declaration for a single shorthand property", respectively. That doesn't seem necessary. There are multiple rules and talking about multiple declarations instead doesn't seem to make the sentence clearer. > > > "In this example, 'font-variant', and 'font-style' take their initial > values." > > Add 'font-size-adjust' and 'font-stretch' to the list. As above: these properties are not in CSS 2.1. Bert -- Bert Bos ( W 3 C ) http://www.w3.org/ http://www.w3.org/people/bos/ W3C/INRIA bert@w3.org 2004 Rt des Lucioles / BP 93 +33 (0)4 92 38 76 92 06902 Sophia Antipolis Cedex, France
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