- From: Susan Lesch <lesch@macvirus.com>
- Date: Tue, 7 Apr 1998 04:59:08 -0400 (EDT)
- To: www-style@w3.org, "Eric A. Meyer" <eam3@po.cwru.edu>
General Comments ---------------- Attractive. Easy to navigate. Very nice use of H1 header and white on title page. Much easier to complete than the NIST's tests, because there are so many fewer pages. With this number of pages, maybe no sitemap or full index is required. If you approach a hundred pages, then indexing similar to NIST's might help. Suggestion for the navbars: make them Bobby-approved, with a separating character between adjacent links, or else you might make the enclosing [brackets] the separators, outside the anchors. We can dream. Make the whole suite HTML 4.0 strict with DOCTYPEs. :-) Pages ----- 1.6 (sec16.htm) P outside TABLE would not be navy, given that the only color specified for P is HTML BODY TABLE P {color: navy; font-family: sans-serif;}. Ian Hickson mentioned this I believe. 1.7 (sec17.htm) Maybe add a test for a comment inside a style rule, like for example: .three {color: green; /* background: yellow; */} 2.4 (sec24.htm) Paragraphs would be "maroon" not "green"; (there is no style for green there). 3.1 (sec31.htm) On this page, "The style declarations which apply to the text below are:" statements might include a note that there is some inline style (which causes the red). 5.2.2 (sec522.htm) Minor point. The sentences, "This sentence is normal for the first section." are serif because they are inside DIV.a which is font-family:serif. Same for DIV.b and monospace. This might have been less confusing to me if the DIVs had no style rules, or, if "The style declarations which apply to the text below are:" said, "The style declarations which apply to the two sections below are:". 5.2.5 (sec525.htm) "This is a heading-4." and "This is a bolder heading-4." might be less likely to be confused with "minus 4" if they read "This is a H4 heading." and "This is a bolder H4 heading." 5.3.2 (sec532.htm) "No maroon backgrounds here!" There is no maroon declaration; I think this means "green." 5.5.25 and 5.5.26 (sec5525.htm and sec5526.htm) "redtall.gif" either needs WIDTH and HEIGHT or a square shape like "redsqr.gif" or "redsquare.gif" or the text could be changed from, "a red square." I hope there is not too much duplication of effort here. Best of luck with your project, Eric. It is looking great. Susan Lesch
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