- From: Lofton Henderson <lofton@rockynet.com>
- Date: Mon, 28 Oct 2002 08:38:57 -0700
- To: Lynne Rosenthal <lynne.rosenthal@nist.gov>
- Cc: www-qa-wg@w3.org
- Message-Id: <5.1.0.14.2.20021028080323.03f55040@rockynet.com>
Here are some comments on the 10/25 SpecGL issues (and "@@@" flags)... At 11:18 AM 10/25/02 -0400, you wrote: >The following are a list of the problems/issues identified in the latest >version of SpecGL http://www.w3.org/QA/WG/2002/10/qaframe-spec-20021025 >and marked by @@@. I've indicated the items I think are the highest >priority. Unless someone suggests indicates a preference/priority, my >intention is to address the ** in order > >SpecGL problems/issues > >** indicates priority. >* indicates we can deal with this quickly > >*G 1: explanation and clean-up of sentence on use cases (editorial) The parenthetical "(specification)" is an indication of uncertainty about how the generic "use cases" definition was adapted to SpecGL. The original word "system" came from some (???) definition. What is the "system in this context? > 1.3: make the statement stronger. Currently requires only 1 example I think it should be made stronger, but don't know how to do it. Some time we said, "example per major feature", but the latter could be tricky to define. "at least 1 example" is pretty feeble. 1.4: "definition of 'formal description' needed" -- is someone already assigned to do this? > *2.2: move discussion on class of product to ET This is one of those "negative disclaimer" sorts of statements. If we can clarify what we mean a little better, then I think it is more useful here than in ET. Can we clarify? Does it mean, "[what is in scope and] what is out of scope of the conformance requirements?". What it now says is, "it may be appropriate to specify that which is not a requirement", which I don't understand. Can someone give an example? > *2.2 reword CP or its TA No opinion on the specific question. But ... do we really mean to limit it to "the Introductory section"? I agree that it might want to be up front. At least, it would be better to say "in an introductory section". (Would the spec fail this CP if the authors put it in their "Scope & goals" section, which seems a reasonable place? Or in their "Conformance" chapter?). >** 3.1 TOC for profiles >3.3 do we need a rationale or write a better one See threads: http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/www-qa-wg/2002Oct/0127.html http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/www-qa/2002Oct/0021.html 3.3 "@@@so?"... Currently the rationale is "a profile places requirements on each class of product that is affected by the profile's definition". I agree that it's a bad rationale. But I have another problem. The statement of the CP is in terms of "must define minimal required support/features for each class of product". What does "minimal required support/features" mean, and how would it differ from "complete set of conformance requirements", and which one do we really want? >**3.5 what is meant by 'testable rule' 'clash' @@@ what is a testable rule: "rules" could probably be replaced by "requirements", or (better, I think) defined in terms of requirements (the objects being profiles themselves). Then ... we have a definition of "testable requirement" that arose in our friendly discussion of "testable specification" (Tokyo, and see issue #81) >**6.2 rationale for CP on strict conformance >**6.3 rationale See threads: http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/www-qa-wg/2002Oct/0128.html http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/www-qa-wg/2002Oct/0130.html http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/www-qa-wg/2002Oct/0131.html Clash: contradict, redefine, ... (add a few more bad things, if you can think of them). >7.2 reword CP or its TA > >7.3 applicability of CP to class of product >G9 rewritten, general consensus >9.6 applicability, remove? >**12.1 normative ICS > **12.2 more ICS See thread: http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/www-qa-wg/2002Oct/0117.html >13.1 add words on capitalization >13.3 testability of consistent terminology >**14.1 TA discussion on normativity >
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