Comments for WD-patent-policy-20010816

I read your Last Call Working Draft [1] for editorial errors and saw
only these three minor points. It looks excellent from a mechanical

In section 7.3, "on-going" should read "ongoing." In the Status
section, "Working Group" should be capitalized to match the W3C Process
document. Sorry I missed those earlier.

Also, a new Process document became operative on 19 July 2001 and
should appear in section 10 as well as in each local link (in sections
4, 5.1, and 5.3).


Best wishes for your project,
Susan Lesch -  tel:+1.858.483.4819
World Wide Web Consortium (W3C) -

Received on Monday, 24 September 2001 02:21:01 UTC