[RIF][PRD] Complete Read of RIF-PRD

I did a complete read on a printout of
version 19:04, 11 January 2009, of


in the airplanes to Portland.

My scanned scribbled comments are attached (in two parts).

I found there is huge progress in RIF-PRD editing.
Yet, there are several things that could still be improved,
e.g. revolving around conflict resolution (e.g., issue on page 29).

-- Harold

Received on Wednesday, 14 January 2009 21:22:27 UTC