Re: Sentence in COGA Note

+1 to the proposed wording.

Kind regards,
Laura

On 5/5/20, David MacDonald <david@can-adapt.com> wrote:
> Hi all
>
> on the call today there was quite a lively discussion around this sentence.
>
> CURRENT
> "People with cognitive and learning disabilities may not be able to
> effectively use web content because of the design and content choices of
> the author."
>
> I've gone back and tried to capture the essence of Lisa's rationale, while
> steering the focus to the design/content and rather than the author. I also
> used John Avila's word "impact" rather than "because".
>
> SUGGESTED
> Design and content choices can impact the content in ways that make it
> difficult or impossible for some users with cognitive and learning
> disabilities to use this content.
>
> Cheers,
> David MacDonald
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-- 
Laura L. Carlson

Received on Tuesday, 5 May 2020 19:17:07 UTC