Re: Sentence in COGA Note

HI Charles

Would this work for you


"Design and content choices can impact perceivability, understandability
and/or usability in ways that make it difficult or impossible for some
people with cognitive and learning disabilities to use this content."

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On Tue, May 5, 2020 at 2:38 PM Hall, Charles (DET-MRM) <charles.hall@mrm.com>
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> I too like shifting from creator to creation. However, this now implies
> that the impact is to the content itself versus the impact being on the
> user. It also uses the word content several times.
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> *From: *Jonathan Avila <jon.avila@levelaccess.com>
> *Date: *Tuesday, May 5, 2020 at 2:37 PM
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> That wording is fine with me too.
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> I do see how you’ve shifted the lens with the verbiage. The new wording is
> less abrasive. I wouldn’t oppose the change.
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> On May 5, 2020, at 11:15 AM, David MacDonald <david@can-adapt.com> wrote:
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> Hi all
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> on the call today there was quite a lively discussion around this sentence.
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> CURRENT
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> "People with cognitive and learning disabilities may not be able to
> effectively use web content because of the design and content choices of
> the author."
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> I've gone back and tried to capture the essence of Lisa's rationale, while
> steering the focus to the design/content and rather than the author. I also
> used John Avila's word "impact" rather than "because".
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> SUGGESTED
> Design and content choices can impact the content in ways that make it
> difficult or impossible for some users with cognitive and learning
> disabilities to use this content.
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