Another Attempt (was: Sentence in COGA Note)

How about instead:

""People with cognitive and learning disabilities may be negatively
impacted and unintentionally blocked from effectively using some web
content due to certain design and content choices."


JF

On Tue, May 5, 2020 at 1:15 PM David MacDonald <david@can-adapt.com> wrote:

> Hi all
>
> on the call today there was quite a lively discussion around this sentence.
>
> CURRENT
> "People with cognitive and learning disabilities may not be able to
> effectively use web content because of the design and content choices of
> the author."
>
> I've gone back and tried to capture the essence of Lisa's rationale, while
> steering the focus to the design/content and rather than the author. I also
> used John Avila's word "impact" rather than "because".
>
> SUGGESTED
> Design and content choices can impact the content in ways that make it
> difficult or impossible for some users with cognitive and learning
> disabilities to use this content.
>
> Cheers,
> David MacDonald
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