Jason, I disagree with David’s proposal. Suggesting that it is just wording changes that are needed when if fact there may be conceptual issues, lack of data, or other difficult problems. It invites reviewers to edit, but not explore the deeper issues.
On 2/20/17, 3:12 PM, "White, Jason J" <jjwhite@ets.org<mailto:jjwhite@ets.org>> wrote:
From: David MacDonald [mailto:david100@sympatico.ca]
Sent: Monday, February 20, 2017 3:02 PM
>Incomplete Candidates" ?
It could be something like this.
[Jason] […]
I would be comfortable with language such as that which David has put forward here, preferably after moving the proposals into an Appendix, but leaving the two proposals that the working group agreed should go in the draft in the body of the document.
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