Re: changes to plain language based on the feedback from lisa.seeman on 2017-05-17 (w3c-wai-gl@w3.org from April to June 2017)

From: lisa.seeman <lisa.seeman@zoho.com>
Date: Wed, 17 May 2017 21:57:23 +0300
To: Gregg C Vanderheiden <greggvan@umd.edu>
Cc: "w3c-waI-gl@w3. org" <w3c-wai-gl@w3.org>
Message-Id: <15c17c3bba4.f3e5988b65801.5849877042875954693@zoho.com>

Hi Gregg, I think we should weight to tweek the wording if it looks like the SC might get in...

All the best

Lisa Seeman

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---- On Mon, 15 May 2017 23:21:45 +0300 Gregg C Vanderheiden&lt;greggvan@umd.edu&gt; wrote ---- 


 
 
On May 15, 2017, at 2:47 PM, lisa.seeman &lt;lisa.seeman@zoho.com&gt; wrote:

For error messages that require a response to continue, instructions, labels and navigational elements all of the following are true: 


this sentence is hard to parse


How about




For instructions, labels, navigational elements, and error messages that require a response to continue, all of the following are true:





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Gregg C Vanderheiden
greggvan@umd.edu

Received on Wednesday, 17 May 2017 18:57:56 UTC