Some more Editorial Items

Oops

These got cut off of the listing I posted earlier.

 

 

 


Item 19 - REFERENCE 3.2 Best Practice Item #1


 

Suggest that it be made a little more explicit as to where this list is.
Therefore, suggest that item number 1 be changed to read:

 

"A list is provide ON THE PAGE OR HOMEPAGE of URIs."

 

Also should add an editorial note at the end of this one saying 

 

[editorial note: we need to specify the format if this is to be useful]

 

 


Item 20 - REFERENCE 3.3


 

The form of the verbs changes in the middle of the 3.3 checkpoint.  The
phrase:

 

"and/or supplement with"

 

should be changed to:

 

"and/or is supplemented with".

 

 

 


Item 21 - REFERENCE  4.2


 

4.2 states that, "The web resource includes a list of the technologies users
must have in order for its content to work as intended".  Since HTML is a
technology and this is not the intent here, suggest that after the phrase
"list of the technologies" we include a parenthetical:

 

(other than standard HTML)