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Re: All Titles Together (Experience Shared...)

From: Sylvie duchateau <sylvie.duchateau@snv.jussieu.fr>
Date: Thu, 24 Jul 2008 12:42:48 +0200
Message-ID: <48885CA8.4000702@snv.jussieu.fr>
To: Yeliz Yesilada <yesilady@cs.man.ac.uk>
Cc: Andrew Arch <andrew@w3.org>, Shadi Abou-Zahra <shadi@w3.org>, EOWG <w3c-wai-eo@w3.org>

hello Yeliz and all,
I like your title very much. It's clear, gives a good summary and no too 
long!
Best
Sylvie

Yeliz Yesilada a écrit :
> 
> It would be good to have "barriers" in the title to precisely define the 
> scope of this document so what about this one:
> 
> *Shared Experiences: Barriers Common to Mobile Device Users and People 
> with Disabilities*
> 
> Advantages:
> - It has "shared experiences" in the title;
> - It has "barriers" in the title so it clearly defines the scope
> - It does not give the impression that we are talking about the 
> experiences of people with disabilities using mobile devices.
> 
> Yeliz.
> 
> On 24 Jul 2008, at 10:03, Andrew Arch wrote:
> 
>>
>> Hi,
>>
>> Trying to get the 'shared experiences' bit in, as well as specifying 
>> it the Web, and who the two groups are, how about returning to sort of 
>> where we started:
>>
>> Shared Web Experiences: Mobile Device Users and People with Disabilities
>> or
>> Shared Experiences: Mobile Web Users and People with Disabilities
>>
>> Or is it still too long?
>>
>> Cheers, Andrew
>>
>> Shadi Abou-Zahra wrote:
>>> Hi Wayne, all,
>>> Wayne Dick wrote:
>>>> I like the long titles for their descriptive value, but the length 
>>>> is a problem.  I tend to lose the middle of long words and 
>>>> sentences.  So, I'm thinking we must cut the length even if 
>>>> descriptive precision is lost.
>>>> Maybe something new like:
>>>>
>>>> Mobile Device Use: A self imposed disability
>>> There are several issues with this title in my opinion:
>>> #1. it suggests that the document is about the use of mobile devices
>>> #2. it does not reflect the main aspect of shared user experiences
>>> #3. it implicitly equates using mobile devices to having a disability
>>> I think the use of the colon is useful though, it provides a short 
>>> name and a slightly longer explanation (as Sylvie had also suggested).
>>> Regards,
>>>   Shadi
>>
>> -- 
>> Andrew Arch
>> Web Accessibility and Ageing Specialist
>> W3C/ERCIM, Sophia Antipolis, France
>> Ph +33 (0)4 92 38 79 46
>> www.w3.org/WAI/WAI-AGE/
>>
> 
> 
> 
> 
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