- From: Shawn Henry <shawn@w3.org>
- Date: Thu, 03 Jan 2008 16:43:42 -0600
- To: Alan Chuter <achuter@technosite.es>
- Cc: "EOWG (E-mail)" <w3c-wai-eo@w3.org>
Thanks for the comments, Alan. I made a few changes, and left the others for EOWG discussion. ~shawn Alan Chuter wrote: > I like the idea of the subtitle. The title "Web Accessibility and > Mobile Phones" is short and easy to grasp, while the subtitle > qualifies it. Perhaps "Web Content for People with Disabilities and > Mobile Phones" might work, too. > > The terms "global", "all time high" and "surge" In the first sentence > are a bit overwhelming. > > For the navigation, I think that "Mobile Overlap" is too narrow. > although the MWBP document is about the overlap, this one can be wider > in scope. Perhaps "Mobile Web" covers the concept more completely. > Accessibility is evident from the context. > > The "W3C Guidelines Overlap" doesn't seem to quite fit in the section > "Similar Barriers and Solutions", as it also applies to "Doing Both" > and "Resources". The latter actually describes the overlap, so perhaps > it should be expanded to describe it more explicitly, rather than > being a separate resources section. Perhaps there should be "Similar" > and "Both.." sections, and then explain how this plays out in W3C > Recommendations, and finally what we're doing to bridge the gap. > > Perhaps the document should explain that the two fields tend to have > their own specialists who are not too aware of what the others do, or > what the (perceived) other group of users need, and that many people > with disabilities are in both groups. And that the Recommendations are > developed by and for different groups within W3C, and the effect this > tends to have. > > best regards to EO people for the New Year 2008, > > Alan > > . > > On 03/01/2008, Shawn Henry <shawn@w3.org> wrote: >> EOWG, >> >> I hope that you had wonderful holidays! >> >> At the EOWG teleconference this week, we will discuss the updated WCAG-MWBP intro document at >> http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/MWBP-WCAG/accessibility_mobile.html >> >> In the meantime, please comment on the list about: >> >> * Title: We had talked about a shorter title; however the editors feel that the shorter options aren't sufficient - especially given that "accessibility" doesn't have anything to do with people with disabilities for many, especially in the context of mobile. Are you OK with the title of "Making a Web Site Both Accessible for People with Disabilities and for Mobile Devices", or would you strongly prefer a short title with subtitle, e.g., "Web Accessibility and Mobile Phones: Making your Web site both accessible for people with disabilities and for mobile devices"? >> >> * Navigation: for the WAI nav bar, we'd like a couple word shortname. How about "Mobile Overlap"? >> In the information architecture <http://www.w3.org/WAI/sitemap.html>, should it be located under: >> - "Introducing Accessibility" because it's a basic concept? >> - "Guidelines & Techniques" because it is introducing the detailed technical documents of the overlap between WCAG and the Mobile Web Best Practices? >> - "Managing Accessibility">"Implementation Plan for Web Accessibility" because it's about considering both sets of guidelines in your web development process? >> - "Managing Accessibility">"... Business Case..." because it supports the additional benefit of accessibility? >> >> * Any other comments or suggestions for this first version? Do you approve this document for publication? >> >> Regards, >> >> ~Shawn >> for Justin, document editors >> >> >> > > -- Shawn Lawton Henry, W3C Web Accessibility Initiative (WAI) about: http://www.w3.org/People/Shawn/ phone: +1-617-395-7664 e-mail: shawn@w3.org
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