- From: Alan Chuter <achuter@technosite.es>
- Date: Thu, 3 Jan 2008 14:13:26 +0100
- To: "EOWG (E-mail)" <w3c-wai-eo@w3.org>
I like the idea of the subtitle. The title "Web Accessibility and Mobile Phones" is short and easy to grasp, while the subtitle qualifies it. Perhaps "Web Content for People with Disabilities and Mobile Phones" might work, too. The terms "global", "all time high" and "surge" In the first sentence are a bit overwhelming. For the navigation, I think that "Mobile Overlap" is too narrow. although the MWBP document is about the overlap, this one can be wider in scope. Perhaps "Mobile Web" covers the concept more completely. Accessibility is evident from the context. The "W3C Guidelines Overlap" doesn't seem to quite fit in the section "Similar Barriers and Solutions", as it also applies to "Doing Both" and "Resources". The latter actually describes the overlap, so perhaps it should be expanded to describe it more explicitly, rather than being a separate resources section. Perhaps there should be "Similar" and "Both.." sections, and then explain how this plays out in W3C Recommendations, and finally what we're doing to bridge the gap. Perhaps the document should explain that the two fields tend to have their own specialists who are not too aware of what the others do, or what the (perceived) other group of users need, and that many people with disabilities are in both groups. And that the Recommendations are developed by and for different groups within W3C, and the effect this tends to have. best regards to EO people for the New Year 2008, Alan . On 03/01/2008, Shawn Henry <shawn@w3.org> wrote: > > EOWG, > > I hope that you had wonderful holidays! > > At the EOWG teleconference this week, we will discuss the updated WCAG-MWBP intro document at > http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/MWBP-WCAG/accessibility_mobile.html > > In the meantime, please comment on the list about: > > * Title: We had talked about a shorter title; however the editors feel that the shorter options aren't sufficient - especially given that "accessibility" doesn't have anything to do with people with disabilities for many, especially in the context of mobile. Are you OK with the title of "Making a Web Site Both Accessible for People with Disabilities and for Mobile Devices", or would you strongly prefer a short title with subtitle, e.g., "Web Accessibility and Mobile Phones: Making your Web site both accessible for people with disabilities and for mobile devices"? > > * Navigation: for the WAI nav bar, we'd like a couple word shortname. How about "Mobile Overlap"? > In the information architecture <http://www.w3.org/WAI/sitemap.html>, should it be located under: > - "Introducing Accessibility" because it's a basic concept? > - "Guidelines & Techniques" because it is introducing the detailed technical documents of the overlap between WCAG and the Mobile Web Best Practices? > - "Managing Accessibility">"Implementation Plan for Web Accessibility" because it's about considering both sets of guidelines in your web development process? > - "Managing Accessibility">"... Business Case..." because it supports the additional benefit of accessibility? > > * Any other comments or suggestions for this first version? Do you approve this document for publication? > > Regards, > > ~Shawn > for Justin, document editors > > > -- Email: achuter@technosite.es Blogs http://www.blogger.com/profile/09119760634682340619
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