Re: EOWG: reply requested, wrapping up Involving Users doc

It's time to start a little brainstorm on "Optimizing User 
Involvement".  Here are my two suggestions:

Involving Users Effectively
Getting the Most from Users

I have read the section on "Involving Diverse Users" twice, and I think 
that the issue of "need" that Henk raised is actually addressed in the 
latter part of the first paragraph.  However the sentence "People have 
different disabilities..."  could be changed to People have different 
disabilities [and needs]..."

In the second paragraph of "Optimizing User Involvement".  I suggest the 
following.  Move the sentece before the list to after the list.  Also, 
either include the list within the paragraph flow, or use a definition 
list.  The final result would be:

...from brief consultations to large-scale usability studies. ...  
(inline descriptions of, or definition list for - informal and formal 
evaluation) ... There are *many options in between these extremes.*

Shawn Henry wrote:

>
> EOWG:
>
> I completed edits from last Friday's EOWG teleconference to the 
> "Involving Users in Evaluating Web Accessibility" document at:
>       http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/eval/users.html
>
> I think it is now near ready to call Version 1.0 done. The content is 
> all in place and all that is needed is a minor copyedit with a fresh 
> perspective. Next steps for EOWG are:
> 1. final EOWG review (via e-mail, I hope it won't need another 
> teleconference discussion)
> 2. EOWG participants in good standing approve document via Call for 
> Review survey form ("WBS")
>
> ***REPLY REQUESTED: If possible, I'd like to get step 1 completed by 
> this coming Wednesday and be able to wrap up step 2 the next week. 
> Please reply to this message by Wednesday 5 October stating:
> __ I reviewed the document and any comments are included below (or in 
> a separate e-mail)
> __ I would like to review the document but can't by Wednesday 5 Oct, I 
> will send comments before Monday 10 Oct
> __ I would like to review the document but can't by Monday 10 Oct, 
> please call me to discuss options
> __ I pass on reviewing the document
>
> If you have any concerns with this schedule, feel free to contact me 
> or Judy directly.
>
> Before reviewing, please see:
>
> * requested comment format [thanks to all who have been using this 
> format!]:
>     http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/w3c-wai-eo/2005JulSep/0067
>
> and note:
> - Requirements and Changelog for "Involving Users in Web Accessibility 
> Evaluation"
>       http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/changelogs/cl-eval-ut
> - links to previous versions, teleconference agendas with review 
> questions, and minutes from teleconferences:
>     http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/changelogs/cl-eval-ut#refs
> - recent edits start at:
>     http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/changelogs/cl-eval-ut#changes
>
> Thanks!
>
> Best regards,
> ~ Shawn
>
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