- From: Chuck Letourneau <cpl@starlingweb.com>
- Date: Sat, 08 May 1999 13:33:37 -0400
- To: love26@gorge.net
- Cc: w3c-wai-eo@w3.org
At 08/05/99 11:29 AM , you wrote:
>Slide 74: comma after "windows" in intro (unless you mean "spawned
>windows do not cause..." <g>.
CPL:: fixed.
>
>Slide 75: "... ensure that the label that is either:..." The old "too
>many 'that's' syndrome. The example isn't "intuitively obvious" but
>maybe it's "Oldtymer's Disease".
>
CPL:: removed the extra "that". Added some text to the example to explain
the checkpoint and added a "negative" example for some contrast.
>Slide 76: "I realize that in this case the latter is actually better
>literature than the text-proper, but you get the drift." I thought you
>weren't going for the jocular (pun intended). I don't know about this
>applying to "most" screen-readers?
CPL:: you are incorrect. I was going for the jocular... it was "someone
else" who was suggesting we "business" it up a bit. However, in this case,
I am going on strike. I like my deathless prose. If somebody wants to
send me some "appropriate" text (same approximate number of words, same
possibility for confusion, etc.) then I will substitute it. Otherwise it
stays. Re: "most" screen-readers. I will change it to "some" screen-readers.
>Slide 78: I think the missing comma goes after "correctly"?
CPL:: fixed.
>
>Slide 79: Same old wrong link. The missing comma is after "distinctly"?
CPL:: fixed link (By the way, this highlights the extreme difficulty in
making any changes to the slide sets. Any addition or deletion of a slide
requires manual investigation of all links in the curriculum). Comma added.
>
>What I really found amazing is how little duplication there has been
>between Jim's comments and mine!
CPL:: and thank you both for having distinctly different mind-sets. I
would have gotten bored reading the same comments and typing "see response
to so-and-so".
>--
>Love.
Cheers!
Chuck
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