- From: Ig0r <ig0r.gladkiy@gmail.com>
- Date: Fri, 4 Feb 2011 10:47:57 +0200
- To: "Coralie Mercier" <coralie@w3.org>
- CC: w3c-translators@w3.org
Hello Coralie.
I fixed mistake, please check again.
http://rozetka.com.ua/news-articles-promotions/articles/html_css.html
Best Regards,
Igor Gladkiy
> On Fri, 28 Jan 2011 09:50:52 +0100, Ig0r <ig0r.gladkiy@gmail.com> wrote:
>> Hi,
>> Here
>> (http://rozetka.com.ua/news-articles-promotions/articles/html_css.html)
>> is my roumanian translation
>> of article "CSS tutorial starting with HTML + CSS"
>> (http://www.w3.org/Style/Examples/011/firstcss.en.html)
>>
>> Your comments and advices are welcome.
>>
>> Best Regards,
>> Igor Gladkiy
> Hello Igor
> Thanks for this translation. A few comments before we can take it into
> account.
> Could you update these parts in Cyrillic in the code:
> [[
> <html xmlns="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" xml:lang="ru-RU"
lang="ru-RU">><head><title>Начинаем работу с HTML + CSS</title>
> ]]
> [[
> <p><object type="text/html"
> data="http://rozetka.com.ua/news-articles-promotions/articles/html_css.html/mypage00.htm"><p><a
> href="http://www.w3.org/Style/Examples/011/mypage.html">[Законченная HTML
> страница]</a></p></object>
> ]]
> I also see this which you might want to update the mailto: part, lest
> Дмитрий Красников (Dmitry Krasnikov) is contacted in your stead:
> [[
> Autorul traducerii: Igor Gladkiy <a
> href="mailto:dk-resume@yandex.ru">Ig0r.Gladkiy@gmail.com</a>
> ]]
> There is a broken link to fix:
> <http://validator.w3.org/checklink/checklink?uri=http%3A%2F%2Frozetka.com.ua%2Fnews-articles-promotions%2Farticles%2Fhtml_css.html&hide_type=all&depth=&check=Check>
> [[
> Line: 36
> http://rozetka.com.ua/news-articles-promotions/articles/HTML%20+%20CSS_files/ting0000.mp3
> redirected to
> http://rozetka.com.ua/news-articles-promotions/articles/HTML%20+%20CSS_files/ting0000.mp3/
Status: 301 ->> 404 Not Found
> ]]
> Looking at the original document, the line reads:
> [[ div.advanced {cue: url(ting.mp3) url(tingting.mp3)} ]]
> The location of that file in the original document is:
> <http://www.w3.org/Style/Examples/011/tingting.mp3>
> I advise that either you link to this, or you copy the mp3 locally and
> point to this instead.
> Also, there is font display issue with your document. A colleague of mine
> advised that you should remove the Gill Sans settings from the body tag in:
> <http://rozetka.com.ua/news-articles-promotions/articles/html_css.html/threepar.css>
> I ran the markup validator on your document and it reports 185 errors.
> <http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=http%3A%2F%2Frozetka.com.ua%2Fnews-articles-promotions%2Farticles%2Fhtml_css.html&charset=%28detect+automatically%29&doctype=Inline&group=0>
> This is because you're using the wrong doctype. You declared XHTML 1.0
> Transitional but your markup looks like HTML4.
> If I override the automatic detection and force HTML 4 transitional, the
> validator reports 2 errors:
> <http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=http%3A%2F%2Frozetka.com.ua%2Fnews-articles-promotions%2Farticles%2Fhtml_css.html&charset=%28detect+automatically%29&doctype=HTML+4.01+Transitional&group=0&user-agent=W3C_Validator%2F1.1>
> Coralie
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С уважением,
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Received on Friday, 4 February 2011 08:49:18 UTC