- From: Ig0r <ig0r.gladkiy@gmail.com>
- Date: Fri, 4 Feb 2011 10:47:57 +0200
- To: "Coralie Mercier" <coralie@w3.org>
- CC: w3c-translators@w3.org
Hello Coralie. I fixed mistake, please check again. http://rozetka.com.ua/news-articles-promotions/articles/html_css.html Best Regards, Igor Gladkiy > On Fri, 28 Jan 2011 09:50:52 +0100, Ig0r <ig0r.gladkiy@gmail.com> wrote: >> Hi, >> Here >> (http://rozetka.com.ua/news-articles-promotions/articles/html_css.html) >> is my roumanian translation >> of article "CSS tutorial starting with HTML + CSS" >> (http://www.w3.org/Style/Examples/011/firstcss.en.html) >> >> Your comments and advices are welcome. >> >> Best Regards, >> Igor Gladkiy > Hello Igor > Thanks for this translation. A few comments before we can take it into > account. > Could you update these parts in Cyrillic in the code: > [[ > <html xmlns="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" xml:lang="ru-RU" lang="ru-RU">><head><title>Начинаем работу с HTML + CSS</title> > ]] > [[ > <p><object type="text/html" > data="http://rozetka.com.ua/news-articles-promotions/articles/html_css.html/mypage00.htm"><p><a > href="http://www.w3.org/Style/Examples/011/mypage.html">[Законченная HTML > страница]</a></p></object> > ]] > I also see this which you might want to update the mailto: part, lest > Дмитрий Красников (Dmitry Krasnikov) is contacted in your stead: > [[ > Autorul traducerii: Igor Gladkiy <a > href="mailto:dk-resume@yandex.ru">Ig0r.Gladkiy@gmail.com</a> > ]] > There is a broken link to fix: > <http://validator.w3.org/checklink/checklink?uri=http%3A%2F%2Frozetka.com.ua%2Fnews-articles-promotions%2Farticles%2Fhtml_css.html&hide_type=all&depth=&check=Check> > [[ > Line: 36 > http://rozetka.com.ua/news-articles-promotions/articles/HTML%20+%20CSS_files/ting0000.mp3 > redirected to > http://rozetka.com.ua/news-articles-promotions/articles/HTML%20+%20CSS_files/ting0000.mp3/ Status: 301 ->> 404 Not Found > ]] > Looking at the original document, the line reads: > [[ div.advanced {cue: url(ting.mp3) url(tingting.mp3)} ]] > The location of that file in the original document is: > <http://www.w3.org/Style/Examples/011/tingting.mp3> > I advise that either you link to this, or you copy the mp3 locally and > point to this instead. > Also, there is font display issue with your document. A colleague of mine > advised that you should remove the Gill Sans settings from the body tag in: > <http://rozetka.com.ua/news-articles-promotions/articles/html_css.html/threepar.css> > I ran the markup validator on your document and it reports 185 errors. > <http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=http%3A%2F%2Frozetka.com.ua%2Fnews-articles-promotions%2Farticles%2Fhtml_css.html&charset=%28detect+automatically%29&doctype=Inline&group=0> > This is because you're using the wrong doctype. You declared XHTML 1.0 > Transitional but your markup looks like HTML4. > If I override the automatic detection and force HTML 4 transitional, the > validator reports 2 errors: > <http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=http%3A%2F%2Frozetka.com.ua%2Fnews-articles-promotions%2Farticles%2Fhtml_css.html&charset=%28detect+automatically%29&doctype=HTML+4.01+Transitional&group=0&user-agent=W3C_Validator%2F1.1> > Coralie -- С уважением, Ig0r mailto:Ig0r.Gladkiy@gmail.com
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