Re: COMMENTARY on Tutorials (English this time)

Coralie M.:
Thanks very much!

Best wishes,
C. E. Whitehead
cewcathar@hotmail.com


>From: "Coralie Mercier" <coralie@w3.org>
>To: "CE Whitehead" <cewcathar@hotmail.com>
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>Subject: Re: COMMENTARY on Tutorials (English this time)
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>I will point your communication to Dave Raggett, the tutorials  
>commentaries you mention not being translations of W3C recommendations,  
>notes or outreach materials.
>
>Thanks for the clarification.
>
>Best regards,
>Coralie
>
>On Wed, 29 Nov 2006 07:02:01 +0900, CE Whitehead <cewcathar@hotmail.com>  
>wrote:
>
>>Hi!  Sorry for taking so long to get back.
>>
>>Actually the commentary would probably be inappropriate if Dr. Raggett  
>>were in the process of revising either tutorial-- "Advanced HTML" or  
>>"Adding a Touch of Style."
>>Because I assume that some of the issues I am thinking of addressing  will 
>>be addressed in any revision.
>>
>>Things I wanted to include in the commentary include the following:
>>
>>*note on more updated addressing (with id rather than the a tag with the  
>>name attribute)  now in use (something Dr. Raggett did address as  
>>soon-to-come on the web in his tutorial) (the old a name  will jiggle if  
>>someone defines a.hover in the style codes for links, so the new  
>>addressing gives the writer better control of display)
>>* note the use of float rather than simply align for formatting images  
>>and other elements on the page (float is important in page formatting in  
>>my opinion since it can be used to float a tab menu to the left of the   
>>main page contents)
>>* give more details on formatting/sizing tables as a %, in em, and in  
>>pixels
>>* give details on the java script event onload, and on other java script  
>>events which are used to start the execution of code; since Dr. Raggett  
>>had an example of java script using the onload event in his  
>>"Advanced.html" tutorial, I wanted to point out that onload could only  be 
>>placed once in a page, and then mention where there were other events.
>>* give a brief introduction to java script also
>>
>>In the meantime, I have been working on my own commentary on html page  
>>creation where I just reference the W3C documents and do not comment on  
>>any one in particular; it seems to not require copyright permission and  
>>works fine for me for now if Dr. Raggett is currently revising either  
>>tutorial:
>>http://www.geocities.com/quaiouestenglish/Creezunhabitatweb/EnglCommentsonHTMLjscript.html
>>
>>It also provides an example of the kind of perhaps detailed commentary I  
>>am talking about; I still have not put all the information I want in it.
>>
>>So perhaps that is all that is needed for now, and not a W3C linked  
>>commentary on any tutorial.
>>
>>Let me know if/when the W3C thinks on commentary on the two Raggett  
>>documents, "Advanced.html" and "Adding a Touch of Style" would be in  
>>order.
>>
>>Thanks.
>>
>>--C. E. Whitehead
>>cewcathar@hotmail.com
>>
>>* * *
>>Bonjour!
>>
>>Il sera probable que le commentaire ne sera pas pertinent si Dr. Raggett  
>>est en train de reecrire ou "Advanced.html" ou "Adding a Touch of Style".
>>
>>Y inclus dans ce que je pensais a inclure dans le commentaire:
>>* les facons variees d'adresser le but d'un lien qui se trouve dans la  
>>page ou se trouve aussi le lien;
>>* l'utilisation de la propriete CSS float (alternative a la  
>>propriete/l'attribut CSS align) pour preciser l'affichage d'un image ou  
>>de n'importe quel element dans une page web; cette propriete/c'attribut  
>>s'utilise actuellement plus et plus pour la configuration d'une page  web; 
>>par exemple, on peut utiliser float pour "float" un "tab menu" a la  
>>gauche du contenu d'une page;
>>* les facons de preciser la taille d'un tableau (comme % ou en em ou en  
>>pixel);
>>* l'evenement javascript onload et autres evenements javascript; cet  
>>evenement javascript s'utilise dans le petit programme javascript--inclu  
>>par Dr. Raggett comme exemplaire dans son didacticiel, "Advanced.html";  
>>il me semblait qu'il vaudrait mieux expliquer un peu le javascript dans  
>>cet exemplaire, par exemple, l'evenement onload ne peut s'utiliser  qu'une 
>>seul fois dans une page web;
>>* quelques renseignements de plus sur javascript.
>>
>>
>>Pour l'instant, je suis en train de creer une page dont j'explique un  peu 
>>l'html et le javascript--avec des references aux documents du w3c,  mais 
>>sans etre commentaire sur un document particulier du w3c; voici le  lien:
>>http://www.geocities.com/quaiouestenglish/Creezunhabitatweb/EnglCommentsonHTMLjscript.html
>>
>>
>>Il se trouve dans ce document-ci le type de commentaire que je pensais a  
>>creer!
>>
>>(En plus, je ne crois pas qu'il y a le probleme de droit de  
>>copy/copyright qu'il y a avec le commentaire et ainsi que je peux le  
>>faire sans vous demander permission.)
>>
>>Peut-etre ca va pour le moment;   s'il vous plait, n'hesitez pas a me  
>>contacter en cas ou le w3C s'interesse a quelque chose de plus, c'est a  
>>dire, a un commentaire sur les documents du Dr. Raggett, "Advanced.html"  
>>et "Adding a Touch of Style".
>>
>>En vous remerciant a l'avance,
>>
>>C. E. Whitehead
>>cewcathar@hotmail.com
>>
>>
>>>From: "Coralie Mercier" <coralie@w3.org>
>>>To: "CE Whitehead" <cewcathar@hotmail.com>, w3c-translators@w3.org
>>>CC: www-html-editor-request@w3.org
>>>Subject: Re: COMMENTARY on Tutorials (English this time)
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>>>Hello
>>>
>>>I don't know what a commentary on tutorials is and how relevant that is  
>>>to  the w3c-translators list. Can you please clarify?
>>>
>>>Thanks in advance
>>>
>>>Coralie
>>>
>>>On Wed, 22 Nov 2006 09:28:12 +0900, CE Whitehead  <cewcathar@hotmail.com> 
>>>  wrote:
>>>
>>>>Hi, I am thinking of commenting on the following tutorials (in  English  
>>>>this time):
>>>>
>>>>Dave Raggett, "More Advanced Features" (of HTML),
>>>>http://www.w3.org/MarkUp/Guide/Advanced.html
>>>>
>>>>and
>>>>
>>>>Dave Raggett, "Adding a Touch of Style" (to HTML pages),
>>>>http://www.w3.org/MarkUp/Guide/Style.html
>>>>
>>>>Please let me know if such commentary would be in order
>>>>(if Dr. Raggett is about to update either page, then I can skip this   
>>>>commentary and wait and see if this commentary is in order)?
>>>>
>>>>Thanks.
>>>>
>>>>--C. E. Whitehead
>>>>cewcathar@hotmail.com
>>>>
>>>>The main notes I have are:
>>>>
>>>>1.  GENERAL:
>>>>XML served as a form of HTML, with XHTML, is now starting to be   
>>>>preferred over HTML on the World Wide Web (XML is important in the   
>>>>semantic web; it's possible to create one's own semantic categories   
>>>>using XML; XML uses tree structures; trees--with roots, branches, and   
>>>>branches from the branches (though I myself tend to think of the XML   
>>>>structures as parenthetical comments inside of other parenthetical   
>>>>comments) are one kind of data structure; tables--or arrays of   
>>>>arrays--are another).
>>>>The XHTML has some similarities to HTML, but has its own  peculiarities. 
>>>>   Persons interested in learning HTML might also be  interested in 
>>>>learning  about XML and XHTML!  See the W3C  Recommendation, XHTML 1.0, 
>>>>for  information about XHTML.
>>>>
>>>>2.  TABLES ("More Advanced Features"); FONT ("Adding a Touch of Style")
>>>>
>>>>The focus of the information/examples about Tables in "More Advanced   
>>>>Features"/font size in "Adding a Touch of Style," seems to be in  
>>>>general  aimed at telling HTML writers how to create Tables that are  
>>>>more  accessible to all, with the font size relative to the user  
>>>>settings, and  the cell size flexible to accommodate when words are  not 
>>>>wrapped.
>>>>
>>>>2.a.  Tables of Pre-defined size (versus tables where the width is   
>>>>defined as a percentage of window width; or tables where the width is   
>>>>undefined) ("More Advanced Features"):
>>>>Some writers however still use Tables to format pages; though style   
>>>>codes that define divisions within the page today can similarly format  
>>>>a  page into rows and columns.
>>>>If one opts to set the size of one's table in pixels, then perhaps  one  
>>>>should also specify the exact size of the font rather than a  relative  
>>>>font size, or the table size and column widths might be  resized anyway  
>>>>(the Mozilla browser, which never wraps longer text  strings in a table  
>>>>cell, does this; while the Internet Explorer  browser can also wrap  
>>>>longer text strings, for example, when the text  string indicates a 
>>>>link).
>>>>It's wise thus to opt for a relatively large font I guess to begin  with 
>>>>  in pre-sized tables, to accommodate all users.
>>>>It's of course possible to control word-wrapping completely in table   
>>>>cells by inserting an additional division (a paragraph or other   
>>>>division) within the cells, but word-wrapping is not one of the  
>>>>possible  attributes of table cells so it does not work with style  
>>>>definitions of  table cells; you have to add the division  (for HTML  
>>>>versions 4.0, 4.01).
>>>>
>>>>3.  The Banner Add java script code in the section on Adding Java  
>>>>Script  to HTML Pages ("More Advanced Features")
>>>>
>>>>Onload is an action which can be called on only once in a page; the   
>>>>"onload" code is normally placed in the Body tag and when placed in  the 
>>>>  Body tag will generally happen about the same time the page  loads  (I 
>>>>do  not know that much java script though; oh well; want to  comment on 
>>>>it  anyway).
>>>>
>>>>4.  ("Adding a Touch of Style")
>>>>It's generally argued that the style codes (normally placed in the   
>>>>headers; ideally place these in the headers, just above the body tag,  
>>>>if  there are no java script functions; otherwise place these in the  
>>>>headers  just before any java script functions are defined as java  
>>>>script  functions sometimes make use of the style definitions; of  
>>>>course, some  web hosts incorporate one's page into the body of a  
>>>>host-created page  and then the only place to place the style and java  
>>>>script function  definitions is under the body tag alas) are the best  
>>>>way to specify  paragraph and division formats.
>>>>To change the style of a page using style definitions at the page  top,  
>>>>one just has to redo the style codes at the top and then check  the new  
>>>>display in a few browsers to make sure the page looks right.
>>>>MS Word of course places the style information in the page division  
>>>>tags  themselves, in the body, so it's not so easy to edit Word  created 
>>>>pages  using HTML; additionally, style definitions at the top  of the 
>>>>page are  overwritten when edited by MS Word.
>>>>(For someone who did not want to get Front Page or learn much HTML, I   
>>>>redid her pages with the style codes in the page division tags so  that  
>>>>the page would not be automatically changed by Word.)
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>I've got a few other notes as well, but nothing else major.
>>>>
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>>>
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