- From: Jodi Schneider <jodi.schneider@deri.org>
- Date: Tue, 6 Sep 2011 15:55:21 +0100
- To: Tom Baker <tbaker@tbaker.de>
- Cc: public-xg-lld <public-xg-lld@w3.org>
- Message-Id: <7C5C1C1B-587C-417C-8666-AD3C8F1BD313@deri.org>
On 5 Sep 2011, at 19:02, Tom Baker wrote: > On Mon, Sep 05, 2011 at 06:03:45PM +0100, Jodi Schneider wrote: >>> -- "Though in principle extensible, the microdata schemas would require a >>> lot of extension..."? Was the more cryptic: "Though _it_ is in principle >>> extensible _it_ would require..." >> >> I find the "though in principle extensible" confusing here, since it precedes >> the subject of the sentence (the microdata schemas). >> >> So I'd prefer something like: >> >> Although they are, in principle, extensible, microdata schemes would need to >> be heavily extended in order to express library information since most of the >> required vocabulary is lacking. >> >> or >> >> Microdata schemes, while in principle extensible, would require a lot of >> extension for use in expressing library information since most of the >> required vocabulary is lacking. >> >> or >> >> Although in principle they are extensible, microdata schemes would need to be >> heavily extended in order to express library information since most of the >> required vocabulary is lacking. > > All three are better than (though consistent with) what I proposed, especially > the third. Will you make the change? Looks like this has been done since I'm reading email very slowly these days: "Although in principle they are extensible, microdata schemes would need to be heavily extended in order to express library information since most of the required vocabulary is lacking." Good choice! :) -Jodi > > Tom >
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