- From: Tom Baker <tbaker@tbaker.de>
- Date: Mon, 5 Sep 2011 17:27:48 -0400
- To: Antoine Isaac <aisaac@few.vu.nl>
- Cc: public-xg-lld@w3.org
On Mon, Sep 05, 2011 at 11:16:57PM +0200, Antoine Isaac wrote:
> OK, I've tried it in
> http://www.w3.org/2005/Incubator/lld/wiki/index.php?title=Draft_issues_page_take2&diff=6212&oldid=6141
> (be careful, this diff includes quite some other changes, including a couple by Tom...)
This pulls the two points together into one coherent point
quite efficiently. Nicely done!
One minor stylistic suggestion:
s/especially, changes/in particular, that changes/
Tom
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