RE: [NEW ISSUE]: 4205 editorial nits WS-Policy 1.5 - Framework

I reviewed these editorial changes. Thank you for carefully reviewing
the introduction. Please assign this one to the editors.

 

Regards,

 

Asir S Vedamuthu

Microsoft Corporation

 

 

From: public-ws-policy-request@w3.org
[mailto:public-ws-policy-request@w3.org] On Behalf Of Christopher B
Ferris
Sent: Friday, January 12, 2007 9:13 AM
To: public-ws-policy@w3.org
Subject: [NEW ISSUE]: 4205 editorial nits WS-Policy 1.5 - Framework

 


http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=4205 

These editorial comments are based on the editor's draft: 

http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2006/ws/policy/ws-policy-framework.h
tml?content-type=text/html;%20charset=utf-8 
Editors' copy $Date: 2007/01/08 17:20:44 $ 

Introduction 

change: 
A policy is a collection of policy alternatives, where a policy
alternative  is a collection of policy assertions. 

to: 
A policy is a collection of policy alternatives. A policy alternative
is a collection of policy assertions. 

change: 
A policy expression
<http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/%7Echeckout%7E/2006/ws/policy/ws-policy-framew
ork.html?content-type=text/html;%20charset=utf-8#policy_expression>  is
an XML Infoset representation of a policy, either in a normal form or in
an equivalent compact form. 

to: 
A policy expression
<http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/%7Echeckout%7E/2006/ws/policy/ws-policy-framew
ork.html?content-type=text/html;%20charset=utf-8#policy_expression>  is
an XML Infoset representation of a policy, either in its normal form or
in its equivalent compact form. 

(we only have one normal form. a normal form suggests that there are
more than one) 

change: 
Some policy assertions specify traditional requirements and capabilities
that will ultimately manifest on the wire (e.g., authentication scheme,
transport protocol selection). 

to: 
Some policy assertions specify requirements and capabilities that will
manifest themselves in the messages exchanged (e.g., authentication
scheme, transport protocol selection). 

change: 
Other policy assertions have no wire manifestation yet are critical to
proper service selection and usage (e.g., privacy policy, QoS
characteristics). 

to: 
Other policy assertions have no manifestation in the messages exchanged,
yet are relevant to service selection and usage (e.g., privacy policy,
QoS characteristics). 

Section 2.1 

change: 
Information items properties are indicated by the style [infoset
property]. 

to: 
Information item properties are indicated by the style [infoset
property]. 


Christopher Ferris
STSM, Software Group Standards Strategy
email: chrisfer@us.ibm.com
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