[NEW ISSUE]: 4205 editorial nits WS-Policy 1.5 - Framework

http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=4205

These editorial comments are based on the editor's draft:

http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2006/ws/policy/ws-policy-framework.html?content-type=text/html;%20charset=utf-8
Editors' copy $Date: 2007/01/08 17:20:44 $

Introduction

change:
A policy is a collection of policy alternatives, where a policy 
alternative  is a collection of policy assertions. 

to:
A policy is a collection of policy alternatives. A policy alternative  is 
a collection of policy assertions. 

change:
A policy expression is an XML Infoset representation of a policy, either 
in a normal form or in an equivalent compact form. 

to:
A policy expression is an XML Infoset representation of a policy, either 
in its normal form or in its equivalent compact form. 

(we only have one normal form. a normal form suggests that there are more 
than one)

change:
Some policy assertions specify traditional requirements and capabilities 
that will ultimately manifest on the wire (e.g., authentication scheme, 
transport protocol selection). 

to:
Some policy assertions specify requirements and capabilities that will 
manifest themselves in the messages exchanged (e.g., authentication 
scheme, transport protocol selection). 

change:
Other policy assertions have no wire manifestation yet are critical to 
proper service selection and usage (e.g., privacy policy, QoS 
characteristics). 

to:
Other policy assertions have no manifestation in the messages exchanged, 
yet are relevant to service selection and usage (e.g., privacy policy, QoS 
characteristics). 

Section 2.1

change:
Information items properties are indicated by the style [infoset property]
. 

to:
Information item properties are indicated by the style [infoset property]. 



Christopher Ferris
STSM, Software Group Standards Strategy
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