RE: Question - Action 29 Dated 7/13/06

Actually there is only two sentences in 4.1.5.  To me the bad one is:

 

For endpoints bound to StockQuoteSoapBinding, the effective policy
<http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2006/ws/policy/ws-policy-attachment
.html?content-type=text/html;%20charset=utf-8#effective_policy#effective
_policy>  of the endpoint is listed in Example 4-1
<http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2006/ws/policy/ws-policy-attachment
.html?content-type=text/html;%20charset=utf-8#Table5#Table5>  (above),
and, for the GetLastTradePrice operation, an additional message-level
effective policy
<http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2006/ws/policy/ws-policy-attachment
.html?content-type=text/html;%20charset=utf-8#effective_policy#effective
_policy>  is in effect for the input message, whose XML 1.0
representation is listed in Example 4-2
<http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2006/ws/policy/ws-policy-attachment
.html?content-type=text/html;%20charset=utf-8#Table6#Table6> .

 

We agreed that the sentence should be broken where the ", and," occurs.

 

/paulc

Paul Cotton, Microsoft Canada
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From: public-ws-policy-eds-request@w3.org
[mailto:public-ws-policy-eds-request@w3.org] On Behalf Of Asir Vedamuthu
Sent: July 21, 2006 7:49 AM
To: public-ws-policy-eds@w3.org
Subject: Question - Action 29 Dated 7/13/06

 

ACTION: editors to get rid of run-on sentence in 4.1.5 [recorded in
http://www.w3.org/2006/07/13-ws-policy-minutes.html#action29]

 

Do you know what sentence this action item is referring to?

 

Regards,
 
Asir S Vedamuthu

Microsoft Corporation