WS-Addressing 1.0 Core - section 2.1 -- unclear wording regarding conflicts between metadata (editorial)

WS-Addressing 1.0 Core [1] section 2.1 says:

"To deal with conflicts between the embedded metadata of two EPRs, or 
between embedded metadata and metadata obtained from a different source, 
or to ascertain the current validity of embedded metadata, mechanisms 
that are outside of the scope of this specification, such as EPR life 
cycle information 2.4 Endpoint Reference Lifecycle or retrieval of 
metadata from an authoritative source, SHOULD be used."

It is not clear which two EPRs the sentence is referring to.
I would like to suggest that the sentence be changed to:

"To deal with conflicts between the embedded metadata of two EPRs 
pertaining to the same endpoint, or between embedded metadata and 
metadata obtained from a different source, or to ascertain the current 
validity of embedded metadata, mechanisms that are outside of the scope 
of this specification, such as EPR life cycle information 2.4 Endpoint 
Reference Lifecycle or retrieval of metadata from an authoritative 
source, SHOULD be used."

-Anish
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[1] http://www.w3.org/TR/2005/WD-ws-addr-core-20050331/

Received on Thursday, 12 May 2005 07:36:26 UTC