RE: Draft of Second Screen Presentation Working Group Charter available (was: Heads-Up: Plan for Working Group on Second Screen Presentation)

Hi Anssi and All,

Many thanks to Anssi for drafting the charter.  Below are my comments:

> Alternately, if the second screen device understands some other means of
transmitting a page to display
> and a  means of two-way message passing, the second page can be rendered
on the remote device. How and

How about changing "on the remote device" into "by the remote device"?

> by which device the second page is rendered is an implementation detail.
The User Agent provides access
> to the known secondary displays it has access to, and the API does not
limit the options to be used as
> secondary displays.

The meaning of the last sentence is somewhat unclear at the first glance,
especially the latter part.  It also seems that "known" and "it has access
to" are redundant. How about rephrasing the last sentence as "The User Agent
provides access to any secondary displays it has access to, regardless of
which device renders the second page."?

I also would like to add an example of a multiple UA case to the second
bullet of 2.4.  How about adding DIAL or WebRTC?

Best Regards,
Dong-Young Lee


-----Original Message-----
From: Kostiainen, Anssi [mailto:anssi.kostiainen@intel.com] 
Sent: Monday, May 05, 2014 11:19 PM
To: Philipp Hoschka; public-webscreens@w3.org; Daniel Davis
Subject: Draft of Second Screen Presentation Working Group Charter available
(was: Heads-Up: Plan for Working Group on Second Screen Presentation)

Hi All,

On 23 Apr 2014, at 11:33, Philipp Hoschka <ph@w3.org> wrote:

> There was big interest in enabling second screen applications at the 
> recent Web+TV workshop http://www.w3.org/2013/10/tv-workshop/
> 
> Given this, and the good progress in the Second Screen Presentation CG, we
seem to have enough momentum to bring the work of this CG into W3C
standardization, that is, form a Working Group.
> 
> I discussed this idea with some of you, and received very positive 
> feedback, including a volunteer for charter writing :)

As promised, the initial draft of the proposed Second Screen Presentation
Working Group Charter is now available for your review at:

  http://webscreens.github.io/charter/

All - your comments and contributions are welcome.

As you can see, there is a bunch of TBDs especially looking for your input
and contributions. To help frame the discussion, the Scope and Deliverables
sections are further split into Phase 1 and Phase 2 subsections. We do not
need to maintain this separation, it is an aide to help us separate the
concrete CG deliverables used as a starting point for the WG's work ("Phase
1"), from the work that have been discussed in the Community Group, but for
which no concrete deliverables exists yet ("Phase 2").

The Charter draft is on GitHub (https://github.com/webscreens/charter) to
allow people to make direct contributions to the Charter using pull
requests. Of course, you can also suggest changes by replying to this
thread.

Thanks,

-Anssi

Received on Wednesday, 7 May 2014 15:10:19 UTC