Re: Draft of Second Screen Presentation Working Group Charter available (was: Heads-Up: Plan for Working Group on Second Screen Presentation)

Hi Dong-Young, All,

On 07 May 2014, at 18:09, Dong-Young Lee <dongyoung.lee@lge.com> wrote:

> Many thanks to Anssi for drafting the charter.  Below are my comments:
> 
>> Alternately, if the second screen device understands some other means of
> transmitting a page to display
>> and a  means of two-way message passing, the second page can be rendered
> on the remote device. How and
> 
> How about changing "on the remote device" into "by the remote device”?

Updated.

>> by which device the second page is rendered is an implementation detail.
> The User Agent provides access
>> to the known secondary displays it has access to, and the API does not
> limit the options to be used as
>> secondary displays.
> 
> The meaning of the last sentence is somewhat unclear at the first glance,
> especially the latter part.  It also seems that "known" and "it has access
> to" are redundant. How about rephrasing the last sentence as "The User Agent
> provides access to any secondary displays it has access to, regardless of
> which device renders the second page.”?

Updated as per Dong-Young's suggestion.

For details, see:

https://github.com/webscreens/charter/commit/ab3ef9a681bb56b836f65f76cba964a9f76ad067

> I also would like to add an example of a multiple UA case to the second
> bullet of 2.4.  How about adding DIAL or WebRTC?

Dong-Young - could you submit a proposal for the Out of Scope section amendment so the group could review it?

Thank you for your review and contributions!

Thanks,

-Anssi

Received on Thursday, 8 May 2014 06:36:45 UTC