Re: home page redo -- feedback on writing needed

Thank you very much!

It probably does not matter to anyone, but be consistent. JavaScript or
Javascript (I prefer the more accurate former).


☆*PhistucK*


On Sat, Feb 15, 2014 at 12:34 AM, Jen Simmons <jen@jensimmons.com> wrote:

> Hi folks,
> I've been revising the proposed home page this week, after meetings with
> Julee and Doug to get their input.
>
> Here's the latest: http://webplatform.jensimmons.com/design/
>
> Still ignore the visual design. Think of this as more of a wireframe. What
> do you think of the *content?* Got any proposed improvements on the
> writing? Ways to say the same thing in fewer, or snappier, words? Any
> phrases that won't work well internationally? Anything missing?
>
> The bottom half of the page — the whole section about contributing — is
> the newest... be sure to read it fully.
>
> Thanks!
>
> Jen
>
>
>
> Jen Simmons
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