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Re: home page redo -- feedback on writing needed

From: Jen Simmons <jen@jensimmons.com>
Date: Fri, 14 Feb 2014 18:00:22 -0500
Message-ID: <CAB0bRKOF+7yELttwxbA_rv26CvXf4m+cmx1wCyeJ5cGJLzYSOg@mail.gmail.com>
To: PhistucK <phistuck@gmail.com>
Cc: List WebPlatform public <public-webplatform@w3.org>
Yup, it should be consistent. And JavaScript is more accurate.
Fixed.
Thanks!
Jen

Jen Simmons
designer, consultant and speaker
host of The Web Ahead
jensimmons.com
5by5.tv/webahead
twitter: jensimmons <http://twitter.com/jensimmons>



On Fri, Feb 14, 2014 at 5:38 PM, PhistucK <phistuck@gmail.com> wrote:

> Thank you very much!
>
> It probably does not matter to anyone, but be consistent. JavaScript or
> Javascript (I prefer the more accurate former).
>
>
> ☆*PhistucK*
>
>
> On Sat, Feb 15, 2014 at 12:34 AM, Jen Simmons <jen@jensimmons.com> wrote:
>
>> Hi folks,
>> I've been revising the proposed home page this week, after meetings with
>> Julee and Doug to get their input.
>>
>> Here's the latest: http://webplatform.jensimmons.com/design/
>>
>> Still ignore the visual design. Think of this as more of a wireframe.
>> What do you think of the *content?* Got any proposed improvements on the
>> writing? Ways to say the same thing in fewer, or snappier, words? Any
>> phrases that won't work well internationally? Anything missing?
>>
>> The bottom half of the page — the whole section about contributing — is
>> the newest... be sure to read it fully.
>>
>> Thanks!
>>
>> Jen
>>
>>
>>
>> Jen Simmons
>> designer, consultant and speaker
>> host of The Web Ahead
>> jensimmons.com
>>  5by5.tv/webahead
>> twitter: jensimmons <http://twitter.com/jensimmons>
>>
>>
>
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