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home page redo -- feedback on writing needed

From: Jen Simmons <jen@jensimmons.com>
Date: Fri, 14 Feb 2014 17:34:29 -0500
Message-ID: <CAB0bRKMeXhHPEvHoDzr3GMFT4zjj21y1f7ycXB3oygo7W2NvxQ@mail.gmail.com>
To: List WebPlatform public <public-webplatform@w3.org>
Hi folks,
I've been revising the proposed home page this week, after meetings with
Julee and Doug to get their input.

Here's the latest: http://webplatform.jensimmons.com/design/

Still ignore the visual design. Think of this as more of a wireframe. What
do you think of the *content?* Got any proposed improvements on the
writing? Ways to say the same thing in fewer, or snappier, words? Any
phrases that won't work well internationally? Anything missing?

The bottom half of the page -- the whole section about contributing -- is the
newest... be sure to read it fully.

Thanks!

Jen



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