Re: Comments on USAID's Draft E-PESO Statement of Work

On 01/16/2014 03:20 PM, Steven Rowat wrote:
> On 1/16/14 10:57 AM, Manu Sporny wrote:
> 
>> The purpose of our submission to USAID...
>> 
>> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1pbMPprMm2mfjXC-MzY66hcWzkaz7A_s75NKHUVgChBo/edit?usp=sharing
>>
>> Apologies for the short notice, but we just found out about this
>> opportunity. If anyone on the list objects to submitting this 
>> document to US AID, please let us know. We're going to try to 
>> submit it by next Tuesday (Jan 21st). The deadline is January
>> 23rd, 2014 Manila/1800hrs (Philippines time).
> 
> On a quick read-through it looks great, with one major exception. 
> Capitalization and phrasing of "Web Payments", "Web Payments
> community group", "Web Payments Community Group", "Web Payments
> work", and "Web Payments group" are seriously confusing to me, in
> terms of what is process, what is a group of people, and what is now
> supported by the W3C, -- and what will be supported by the W3C after
> Paris.
> 
> If you want me to make these changes on the document (either just
> "a)", or also "b)") please let me know, because I can do that,
> because as of yesterday I'm a member of the WPCG. :-)

Agreed. You now have editorial access to the document. Please make
changes "a" and "b"... and welcome (officially) to the group. :)

Thanks Steven. :)

-- manu

-- 
Manu Sporny (skype: msporny, twitter: manusporny, G+: +Manu Sporny)
Founder/CEO - Digital Bazaar, Inc.
blog: The Worlds First Web Payments Workshop
http://www.w3.org/2013/10/payments/

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