Comments on Last Call Working Draft of XHR

Hopefully you'll get a formal response from the i18n WG shortly.  In the meantime, I have only a couple of personal editorial suggestions:


[1] 2.2 terminology
It would help a lot to link each of the terms defined in html5 to the appropriate location in the html5 spec, if possible.

[2] same section

I was confused by the term "document's character encoding".  I suspect this ought to be "character encoding (of the document)", where the parenthesised text is non-bold.  The problem was that I thought "document's character encoding" was a single term, like "URL character encoding", and was something different than "character encoding" (in the same way that "document character set" is different from "character set").

Hope that helps,
RI


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Richard Ishida
Internationalization Lead
W3C (World Wide Web Consortium)

http://www.w3.org/International/
http://rishida.net/

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Richard Ishida
Internationalization Lead
W3C (World Wide Web Consortium)

http://www.w3.org/International/
http://rishida.net/

Received on Thursday, 26 November 2009 17:26:25 UTC