- From: Marcin Hanclik <Marcin.Hanclik@access-company.com>
- Date: Tue, 2 Jun 2009 18:57:24 +0200
- To: public-webapps <public-webapps@w3.org>
- Message-ID: <FAA1D89C5BAF1142A74AF116630A9F2C0A26ED9063@OBEEX01.obe.access-company.com>
9.1 Step 1 The section is about acquiring the Zip archive. It is however only about data transfer protocol. What about simple files in the filesystem? Step4 This step only applied to user agents ... should be This step only is applied to user agents ... Step7 What to do when more then one ... should be What to do when more than one ... For example, assume the user agent's locales<http://dev.w3.org/2006/waf/widgets/#user-agents-locales> only contains the ... should be For example, assume the user agent's locales<http://dev.w3.org/2006/waf/widgets/#user-agents-locales> only contain the ... However, if the user agent's locales<http://dev.w3.org/2006/waf/widgets/#user-agents-locales> was "*", should be However, if the user agent's locales<http://dev.w3.org/2006/waf/widgets/#user-agents-locales> contained only "*", type whose xml:lang<http://dev.w3.org/2006/waf/widgets/#xmllang> attribute match the language should be type whose xml:lang<http://dev.w3.org/2006/waf/widgets/#xmllang> attribute matches the language can ask the user agent ignore an object should be can ask the user agent to ignore an object is left up-to the should be is left up to the "5 Otherwise, the element is a widget<http://dev.w3.org/2006/waf/widgets/#widget0> element:" Not very clear structure. It should probably be: "Otherwise, if the element is a widget<http://dev.w3.org/2006/waf/widgets/#widget0> element:" "Let root element be the documentElement of doc." documentElement could be referenced to DOM3 be the result of apply the should be (a few times) be the result of applying the then the attribute is in error<http://dev.w3.org/2006/waf/widgets/#in-error> the user agent must ignore<http://dev.w3.org/2006/waf/widgets/#ignore> it. should be then the attribute is in error<http://dev.w3.org/2006/waf/widgets/#in-error> and the user agent must ignore<http://dev.w3.org/2006/waf/widgets/#ignore> it. "Otherwise, continue this algorithm." Seems not needed. Content element: If the type<http://dev.w3.org/2006/waf/widgets/#type0> attribute is used, could be If the type<http://dev.w3.org/2006/waf/widgets/#type0> attribute is present, If the charset<http://dev.w3.org/2006/waf/widgets/#charset0> attribute is used, could be If the charset<http://dev.w3.org/2006/waf/widgets/#charset0> attribute is present, If a required<http://dev.w3.org/2006/waf/widgets/#required> attribute is used, could be If a required<http://dev.w3.org/2006/waf/widgets/#required> attribute is present ... ignore this element/attribute. Stop processing this element ... Here, better linking to the preceding "if" could add clarity. A "." (dot) and imperative mode may result in misunderstanding (there are many instances of this case). Step 8 then skip this Step and should be then skip this step and If potential-start-file is null or an error, ignore<http://dev.w3.org/2006/waf/widgets/#ignore> should be If potential-start-file is null or in error, ignore<http://dev.w3.org/2006/waf/widgets/#ignore> But potential-start-file cannot be in error, since there is no such assignment. Let start file content-type<http://dev.w3.org/2006/waf/widgets/#start-file-content-type> be the media type<http://dev.w3.org/2006/waf/widgets/#media-type0> given in the second column of the default start files<http://dev.w3.org/2006/waf/widgets/#default-start-files> table. How to choose the item from that columnt? Stopped at Step 8. To be continued. Marcin Hanclik ACCESS Systems Germany GmbH Tel: +49-208-8290-6452 | Fax: +49-208-8290-6465 Mobile: +49-163-8290-646 E-Mail: marcin.hanclik@access-company.com ________________________________ ________________________________________ Access Systems Germany GmbH Essener Strasse 5 | D-46047 Oberhausen HRB 13548 Amtsgericht Duisburg Geschaeftsfuehrer: Michel Piquemal, Tomonori Watanabe, Yusuke Kanda www.access-company.com CONFIDENTIALITY NOTICE This e-mail and any attachments hereto may contain information that is privileged or confidential, and is intended for use only by the individual or entity to which it is addressed. Any disclosure, copying or distribution of the information by anyone else is strictly prohibited. If you have received this document in error, please notify us promptly by responding to this e-mail. Thank you.
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