[UCR] Response to straw poll comments on Section 2.7

Dear RIFers,

I have edited the Third Party Rule-Interchange Services use case
http://www.w3.org/2005/rules/wg/wiki/UCR/Third_Party_Rule-Interchange_S
ervices.

Most of the comments indicated that the text was too long or dense,etc.
The new version has about 780 words compared to the 990 or so of the
original.

Thanks for your feedback, see you in Nice!

Allen

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Received on Friday, 24 February 2006 16:49:02 UTC