Re: HTML+RDFa 1.1 Last Call Draft is Ready

On Jan 29, 2013, at 9:31 AM, Stefan Schumacher <stefan@duckflight.de> wrote:

> 3.4
> Now:
> The currently active attributes declared using @xmlns and @xmlns: stored 
> in the RDFa Processor's current evaluation context in the IRI mappings 
> must be preserved in the generated XMLLiteral.
> Suggestion 1:
> The currently active attributes declared using @xmlns and @xmlns:
> *, that are*
> stored in the RDFa Processor's current evaluation context in the IRI 
> mappings, must be preserved in the generated XMLLiteral.
> Suggestion 2:
> Via @xmlns and @xmlns: declared currently active attributes stored in 
> the RDFa Processor's current evaluation context in the IRI mappings must 
> be preserved in the generated XMLLiteral.
> Note:

Fixed.

> Now:
> The PREFIX value for @xmlns:PREFIX must be transformed to *all* 
> lower-case characters
> Suggestion:
> The PREFIX value for @xmlns:PREFIX must be *entirely* transformed *into* 
> lower-case characters
> Note:
> Without 'all' and 'entirely', should do the work also.

Fixed.

> Now:
> The transformation requirement does not apply to input data that are 
> text-only, ... that that ...
> Suggestion:
> The transformation requirement does not apply to plain text input data, 
> ... that ...
> Note:
> Plain text sounds more like the use in other specs. At the end of this
> sentence, there is a 'that that', one too much, I think.
> My main problem was the 'are'. Is input data plural or singular? Still 
> not native english speaker. Well, my web search told me, it is used with 
> singular or plural verb, so the sentence is actually fine.

Fixed. Technically, datum would be singular, but it is not commonly used. Your non-native english is certainly more than sufficient here!

> Now:
> must have their *namespaces* declarations preserved:
> Suggestion:
> must have their *namespace* declarations preserved:

Fixed.

Thanks again!

Gregg

> Ok, that's it for 3.4. More after dinner.
> Stefan
>

Received on Wednesday, 30 January 2013 19:37:35 UTC