Re: on definition and declaration

On 26/09/2016 16:45, Peter F. Patel-Schneider wrote:
> "Constraints are defined within a shape"
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> "Defined within" is not defined.
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> "Constraints that declare more than one parameters, such as sh:pattern, are
> not allowed to be declared more than once in the same constraint."
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> The first two uses of "declare" come from section 6.2.  A core definition is
> needed.
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> The last use of "declared" is not defined.

I have reworked some of the related prose

https://github.com/w3c/data-shapes/commit/698fe4e72d06b79de8f15a39389b9a7954a79b2e

This does not substitute all usages of "defined" and "declared", but I 
believe the remaining cases are sufficiently intuitive to the average 
reader.

Thanks,
Holger


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> "declare" is used for many different purposes, most of them undefined.
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> Peter F. Patel-Schneider
> Nuance Communications
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