[CLOSED] Typos in SPARQL

closed per message http://www.w3.org/mid/4410224F.6080604@sophia.inria.fr

On Wed, Mar 08, 2006 at 02:34:42PM -0500, Eric Prud'hommeaux wrote:
> On Fri, Feb 24, 2006 at 09:45:23AM +0100, Olivier Corby wrote:
> > 
> > I have found some typos in the SPARQL LC WD.
> 
> These should be addressed in CVS version 1.656 .
> 
> > Best regards,
> > 
> > Olivier.
> > 
> > 
> > 
> > 2.1.1
> > 
> > provides a two abbreviation mechanisms : provides two abbreviation 
> > mechanisms
> 
> done
> > 
> > 
> > 2.5.1
> > 
> > A scoping set is some set of RDF terms : this sentence appears twice.
> 
> done
> > 
> > 
> > 2.5.3
> > 
> > variable'mbox'  : white space is missing
> 
> done
> > 
> > 
> > 2.8.2
> > 
> > the tripe pattern : triple
> > 
> > shodul : should
> 
> done
> > 
> > 
> > 3.2
> > 
> > The "price" variable is written with two different fonts in the same 
> > sentence.
> 
> done
> > 
> > 
> > 5.2
> > 
> > The variable price is not written with quotes whereas some variables 
> > have quotes.
> 
> added quotes around the variable "price" but not the concept.
> > 
> > 
> > 9.2
> > 
> > is indirect. the IRI -> The IRI
> 
> done
> > 
> > 
> > 10.1
> > 
> > If SM is set of modifiers -> is the set
> 
> done
> > 
> > 
> > 10.1.2
> > 
> > no two solutions the same -> are the same
> 
> done
> > 
> > 
> > A ordered -> An ordered
> 
> done
> > 
> > 
> > 11
> > 
> > xsd:dateTime -> same font as other datatypes
> 
> done
> > 
> > SPARQLoperators -> SPARQL operators
> 
> Though I did not find any instances of "SPARQLoperators", I think you
> mean this sentence:
> [[
> Operators introduce by this specification are indicated with the
> SPARQLoperator class.
> ]]
> "SPARQLoperator" is a class name used within the document. This gives
> people with voice browsers and screen readers access to the same
> information as people working from visual representations of the spec.
> Unfortunately, it make also be necessary to publish voice browser
> scripts in order to make real use of the class name. I am considering
> changing the text to
> [[
> Operators introduced by this specification are indicated with 
> <span class="SPARQLoperator">special markup</span>.
> ]]
> though "special mark" ends up being just as informative as "click here".
> > 
> > 
> > 11.2
> > 
> > will return will return
> 
> done
> > 
> > 
> > logical-or truth (T) table for true, ->
> > logical-or truth table for true (T),
> 
> assuming a truth table T...
> done
> > 
> > 
> > 11.3
> > 
> > the xpath definition -> XPath
> 
> done
> > 
> > 
> > 11.4.4
> > 
> > is a Literal -> literal
> 
> done
> > 
> > 
> > 11.6
> > 
> > A extension -> An
> 
> done
> 
> 
> Thanks very much for the keen eyes!
> 
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