- From: Eric Prud'hommeaux <eric@w3.org>
- Date: Wed, 8 Mar 2006 14:34:42 -0500
- To: Olivier Corby <Olivier.Corby@sophia.inria.fr>
- Cc: public-rdf-dawg-comments@w3.org
- Message-ID: <20060308193442.GG17752@w3.org>
On Fri, Feb 24, 2006 at 09:45:23AM +0100, Olivier Corby wrote: > > I have found some typos in the SPARQL LC WD. These should be addressed in CVS version 1.656 . > Best regards, > > Olivier. > > > > 2.1.1 > > provides a two abbreviation mechanisms : provides two abbreviation > mechanisms done > > > 2.5.1 > > A scoping set is some set of RDF terms : this sentence appears twice. done > > > 2.5.3 > > variable'mbox' : white space is missing done > > > 2.8.2 > > the tripe pattern : triple > > shodul : should done > > > 3.2 > > The "price" variable is written with two different fonts in the same > sentence. done > > > 5.2 > > The variable price is not written with quotes whereas some variables > have quotes. added quotes around the variable "price" but not the concept. > > > 9.2 > > is indirect. the IRI -> The IRI done > > > 10.1 > > If SM is set of modifiers -> is the set done > > > 10.1.2 > > no two solutions the same -> are the same done > > > A ordered -> An ordered done > > > 11 > > xsd:dateTime -> same font as other datatypes done > > SPARQLoperators -> SPARQL operators Though I did not find any instances of "SPARQLoperators", I think you mean this sentence: [[ Operators introduce by this specification are indicated with the SPARQLoperator class. ]] "SPARQLoperator" is a class name used within the document. This gives people with voice browsers and screen readers access to the same information as people working from visual representations of the spec. Unfortunately, it make also be necessary to publish voice browser scripts in order to make real use of the class name. I am considering changing the text to [[ Operators introduced by this specification are indicated with <span class="SPARQLoperator">special markup</span>. ]] though "special mark" ends up being just as informative as "click here". > > > 11.2 > > will return will return done > > > logical-or truth (T) table for true, -> > logical-or truth table for true (T), assuming a truth table T... done > > > 11.3 > > the xpath definition -> XPath done > > > 11.4.4 > > is a Literal -> literal done > > > 11.6 > > A extension -> An done Thanks very much for the keen eyes! Given that the accessibilty issues of SPARQLoperator are still being considered, are you satisfied that your comments have been addressed? Please indicate whether you are or are not satisfied. If you are, you can help our issue tracking system by prefixing the subject of your response with [CLOSED] (where this subject has [OK?]). -- -eric office: +81.466.49.1170 W3C, Keio Research Institute at SFC, Shonan Fujisawa Campus, Keio University, 5322 Endo, Fujisawa, Kanagawa 252-8520 JAPAN +1.617.258.5741 NE43-344, MIT, Cambridge, MA 02144 USA cell: +81.90.6533.3882 (eric@w3.org) Feel free to forward this message to any list for any purpose other than email address distribution.
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