- From: Dan Connolly <connolly@w3.org>
- Date: Fri, 17 Feb 2006 15:58:43 -0600
- To: Bjoern Hoehrmann <derhoermi@gmx.net>
- Cc: Eric Prud'hommeaux <eric@w3.org>, public-rdf-dawg-comments@w3.org
On Sun, 2006-01-29 at 02:49 +0100, Bjoern Hoehrmann wrote: [...] > >[CNF] http://www.w3.org/2001/sw/DataAccess/rq23/#conformance > > Editorial remarks: rather than _x_ this should probably use <em> or > something like that; the other appendices have a full stop after the > letter, so the title should probably be "B. Conformance", the title > of Appendix A. is "SPARQL Grammar" not "grammar", similar for appendix > E; the references to the other appendices should be links. fixed in 1.642 2006/02/17 21:56:56 > The references section still has the RFC2119 reference that's never > referred to in the text, the usual "the key words ... in RFC 2119" > text seems to be missing. I assume that's editorial aswell. RFC2119 cite struck. > I didn't review the draft against SpecGL in detail, but with these > editorial nits fixed, I think I'm happy with this. Thanks. You're quite welcome. -- Dan Connolly, W3C http://www.w3.org/People/Connolly/ D3C2 887B 0F92 6005 C541 0875 0F91 96DE 6E52 C29E
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