- From: Kendall Clark <kendall@monkeyfist.com>
- Date: Wed, 26 Oct 2005 10:57:10 -0400
- To: Jonathan Marsh <jmarsh@microsoft.com>
- Cc: DAWG Mailing List <public-rdf-dawg-comments@w3.org>
On 14:21, Tue 25 Oct 05, Jonathan Marsh wrote: > > During our review of the SPARQL LC draft, the WSDL WG identified three > editorial items worthy of comment: > > - the WSDL extract "1.0" uses two undeclared namespace prefixes "st:" > and "tns:", actually 'st:' is used throughout the document. Although the > reader is pointed to the full WSDL "which contains the relevant > namespace declarations", we are becoming accustomed to a convention that > lists a table of namespaces in use, and their associated prefixes within > the document, at the top of the document, and feel readers would prefer > to see this convention followed in the SPARQL spec as well. > > - the status discusses "HTTP and SOAP interfaces for RDF queries" but > elsewhere uses "HTTP and SOAP bindings of this interface", which could > be slightly confusing for readers versed in WSDL speak. > > - the document relies upon the reading of several external documents - a > WSDL and a pair of schemas, the links of which are buried in the > document. In the case of the schemas you have to hop through their > namespace documents. It would be nice to have a separate table calling > out these links so users could see the set of documents comprising the > SPARQL protocol in one place. Jonathan, All of these seem editorial to me, and I'm convinced by the arguments such that I will make changes along these lines to the protocol spec. Cheers, Kendall Clark -- Sad songs and waltzes aren't selling this year... --Cake
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