- From: Henry Zongaro <zongaro@ca.ibm.com>
- Date: Sun, 13 Jun 2004 14:44:47 -0400
- To: Stephen Buxton <Stephen.Buxton@oracle.com>
- Cc: public-qt-comments@w3.org
Steve,
In [1], you submitted the following comment on the Last Call Working
Draft of XSLT 2.0 and XQuery 1.0 Serialization.
Stephen Buxton wrote on 2004-02-18 05:21:15 PM:
> SECTION 2: Serializing arbitrary data models
>
> Step 2 says "If the data model instance contains any atomic
> values, or sequences that contain atomic values, ...".
> But the input to the normalization process is a single sequence,
> and sequences do not nest, so what does it mean to say that
> a sequence contains a sequence? Perhaps you mean the second
> sequence to be a subsequence of the input sequence. But there
> is no need for this case, since if a subsequence contains an
> atomic value, the input sequence also contains an atomic value.
> The phrase "or sequences that contain atomic values" can be
> deleted.
I am not entirely certain why that phrase appeared here, but I agree
that it is entirely redundant. I have applied the editorial change that
you suggested. Thank you for your comment.
Thanks,
Henry
[1]
http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-qt-comments/2004Feb/1037.html
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