- From: Daniel Garijo <dgarijo@delicias.dia.fi.upm.es>
- Date: Wed, 17 Apr 2013 00:08:12 +0200
- To: "<public-prov-wg@w3.org>" <public-prov-wg@w3.org>
- Message-ID: <CAExK0De-e3exS8bpeN-QAG1teTrOXznbTNuAEHC11ofRxkMbVQ@mail.gmail.com>
Hi Paul, Luc. Below is my review of PROV Overview. In general it's just a couple of editorial changes and a few typos. Nice work! Thanks, Daniel Document reviewed (latest working draft): https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/overview/prov-overview.html On 04-16-2013. PROV family of Documents Dublic Core -> Dublin Core. bundles . [PROV-LINKS] -> bundles. [PROV-LINKS] Introduction I think the figure should have a title. Something like: Figure 1: organization of PROV. The different modules could be mentioned when explaining the figure. That would make it easier to follow. Suggestion: "Below is the organization of PROV. At its core is a conceptual data model, which defines a common vocabulary used to describe provenance. This is instantiated by various serializations. These serializations are used by implementations to interchange provenance. To help developers and users express valid provenance, a set of constraints are defined, which can be used to implement provenance validators. Finally, to further support the interchange of provenance, additional specifications are provided for protocols to locate and access provenance, connect sets of provenance descriptions, and define how to interoperate with the widely used Dublin Core vocabulary." --> "Below is the organization of PROV. At its core is a conceptual data model (PROV-DM), which defines a common vocabulary used to describe provenance. This is instantiated by various serializations (PROV-O, PROV-N, PROV-XML, etc). These serializations are used by implementations to interchange provenance. To help developers and users express valid provenance, a set of constraints are defined (PROV-CONSTRAINTS), which can be used to implement provenance validators. Finally, to further support the interchange of provenance, additional specifications are provided for protocols to locate and access provenance (PROV-AQ), connect sets of provenance descriptions (PROV-LINKS), and define how to interoperate with the widely used Dublin Core vocabulary (PROV-DC)." Note that no reference to prov-dictionary or prov sem can be found in the description. Document Roadmap Typo in Table, row 11: "...across bundles of provenance description." --> "across bundles of provenance descriptions." Namespace "...within the namespace http://www.http://www.w3.org/ns/prov#" -> namespace should be http://www.w3.org/ns/prov# Additional information All links point to the release of April 30 except for the PROV implementation report: http://www.w3.org/TR/2013/WD-prov-implementations-20130312/ Acknowledgements: Could you please change my institution to Daniel Garijo (Ontology Engineering Group, Universidad Politécnica de Madrid)?
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