- From: Luc Moreau <l.moreau@ecs.soton.ac.uk>
- Date: Tue, 16 Oct 2012 23:22:27 +0100
- To: public-prov-wg@w3.org
- CC: Graham Klyne <graham.klyne@zoo.ox.ac.uk>
- Message-ID: <EMEW3|f52bbb9f048c9e18d208e11fd2b3aa9bo9FNNm08l.moreau|ecs.soton.ac.uk|507DDE23>
Dear all, I am also adding the following proposed response to ISSUE-518 to the list of responses to review. It takes some recent feedback into account. Regards, Luc > > > ISSUE-518 (PrimarySource) > > * Original > email:http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-prov-wg/2012Sep/0108.html > * Tracker:http://www.w3.org/2011/prov/track/issues/518 > * Group Response > o Following the author's suggestion the Working group proposes > to revise the definition of Primary Source as follows: > + A reference to a primary source indicates a derivation > from an entity that was produced by some agent with direct > experience and knowledge about the entity's conceptual > topic, at the time of the topic's study, without benefit > of hindsight. > o We also propose to add the following comment, inspired by this > issue: > + It is also important to note that a given entity might be > a primary source for one entity but not another. It the > reason why Primary Source is defined as a relation as > opposed to a subtype of Entity. > * References: > * Changes to the document: To implement > * Original author's acknowledgement: > On 28/09/12 08:43, Graham Klyne wrote: > Luc, > > This comparison doesn't work for me. > > The aspect of a relationship is inherent in the term "communication" > (cf. "by two activities"), but such is not present in the bare phrase > "primary source". > > Hence it's possible to get away without saying explicitly > "relationship" with regard to communication. > > Similarly for "derivation". > > #g > -- > > On 27/09/2012 23:45, Luc Moreau wrote: >> >> Hi Stephan: >> >> Look at the two following definitions (others are similar) >> >> Communication ◊ is the exchange of some unspecified entity by two >> activities, >> one activity using some entity generated by the other. >> A derivation ◊ is a transformation of an entity into another, an >> update of an >> entity resulting in a new one, or the construction of a new entity >> based on a >> pre-existing entity. >> >> They don't state "communication is a relation ..." or "The derivation >> relation >> is ...". >> >> That's what I wanted to avoid in the definition of primary source you >> suggested. >> >> Luc >> >> On 27/09/12 23:42, Stephan Zednik wrote: >>> Luc, >>> >>> I am not sure I follow you here. What is your distinction between a >>> concept >>> and a relation in the data model? >>> >>> As for Graham's proposed definition, I do not like the dual usage of >>> 'primary >>> source' as both a relation and the thing being related to. >>> >>> Like Graham I like the inclusion of the term 'relation' because I do >>> not want >>> to introduce confusion regarding whether primary source is a >>> specialization of >>> entity, but I would recommend we drop the second usage of primary >>> source where >>> it appears to be mentioned as a noun. >>> >>> [[ >>> A primary source relation indicates a derivation from an entity that >>> records >>> direct contemporaneous experience or knowledge about its topic, >>> without the >>> revisionary perspective of hindsight. >>> ]] >>> >>> --Stephan >>> >>> On Sep 27, 2012, at 4:15 PM, Luc Moreau <l.moreau@ecs.soton.ac.uk> >>> wrote: >>> >>>> but this definition would not be aligned with the other, since we >>>> define the >>>> concept as opposed to the relation in a data model. >>>> >>>> >>>> On 27/09/12 22:15, Graham Klyne wrote: >>>>> Well, for starters, there's Stephan's original. I wouldn't drop >>>>> "relation" >>>>> here. Since you ask, here's my cut: >>>>> >>>>> [[ >>>>> A primary source relation indicates a derivation from a primary >>>>> source. I.e. >>>>> from an entity that records direct contemporaneous experience or >>>>> knowledge >>>>> about its topic, without the revisionary perspective of hindsight. >>>>> ]] >>>>> >>>>> #g >>>>> -- >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> On 27/09/2012 19:26, Luc Moreau wrote: >>>>>> Hi graham, >>>>>> Can you make a concrete suggestion? >>>>>> >>>>>> Professor Luc Moreau >>>>>> Electronics and Computer Science >>>>>> University of Southampton >>>>>> Southampton SO17 1BJ >>>>>> United Kingdom >>>>>> >>>>>> On 27 Sep 2012, at 16:27, "Graham Klyne"<GK@ninebynine.org> wrote: >>>>>> >>>>>>> I find this revision of Stephan's phrasing to be confusing, even >>>>>>> contradictory. "a primary source is a derivation" seems a bit >>>>>>> oxymoronic >>>>>>> to me. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> #g >>>>>>> -- >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> On 25/09/2012 17:57, Luc Moreau wrote: >>>>>>>> HI Stephan, >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> I would just drop "relation" (because we define the concept) and >>>>>>>> "represents": >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> A primary source is a derivation from an entity that was >>>>>>>> produced by some >>>>>>>> agent >>>>>>>> with direct experience and knowledge about the entity's >>>>>>>> conceptual topic, >>>>>>>> at the >>>>>>>> time of the topic's study, without benefit of hindsight. >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> Luc >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> On 09/25/2012 05:48 PM, Stephan Zednik wrote: >>>>>>>>> How is this? >>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>> A primary source relation represents a derivation from an >>>>>>>>> entity that was >>>>>>>>> produced by some agent with direct experience and knowledge >>>>>>>>> about the >>>>>>>>> entity's >>>>>>>>> conceptual topic, at the time of the topic's study, without >>>>>>>>> benefit of >>>>>>>>> hindsight. >>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>> --Stephan >>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>> On Sep 25, 2012, at 3:41 AM, Luc Moreau<L.Moreau@ecs.soton.ac.uk >>>>>>>>> <mailto:L.Moreau@ecs.soton.ac.uk>> wrote: >>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>> Hi all, >>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>> How do we address this issue? >>>>>>>>>> The current definition is: >>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>> Aprimary >>>>>>>>>> source^◊<http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-dm/#concept-primary-source> >>>>>>>>>> for >>>>>>>>>> a topic refers to something produced by some agent with direct >>>>>>>>>> experience and >>>>>>>>>> knowledge about the topic, at the time of the topic's study, >>>>>>>>>> without >>>>>>>>>> benefit >>>>>>>>>> from hindsight. >>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>> I wonder whether the wording 'refers to' is suitable here. We >>>>>>>>>> don't mean >>>>>>>>>> 'is', but 'a derivation from'. Would this address the concern? >>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>> Luc >>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>> On 10/09/2012 09:46, Provenance Working Group Issue Tracker >>>>>>>>>> wrote: >>>>>>>>>>> PROV-ISSUE-518: Data Model Section 5.2.4 [prov-dm] >>>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>>> http://www.w3.org/2011/prov/track/issues/518 >>>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>>> Raised by: Luc Moreau >>>>>>>>>>> On product: prov-dm >>>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>>> http://www.w3.org/2011/prov/wiki/LC_Feedback#Data_Model_Section_5.2.4 >>>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>>> ISSUE-463 >>>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>>> The definition of a "primary source" implies that it is an >>>>>>>>>>> entity when in >>>>>>>>>>> fact the term qualifies the role that a given entity plays >>>>>>>>>>> during the >>>>>>>>>>> creation of a new entity, not the derivation itself. This >>>>>>>>>>> might seem >>>>>>>>>>> to be a >>>>>>>>>>> minor point, but it is clearly different from both revision and >>>>>>>>>>> quotation, >>>>>>>>>>> both of which could be used when deriving a new entity from >>>>>>>>>>> an entity >>>>>>>>>>> used >>>>>>>>>>> as a primary source. >>>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>>> It is also important to note that a given entity might be a >>>>>>>>>>> primary >>>>>>>>>>> source >>>>>>>>>>> for one entity but not another ("primary source" is >>>>>>>>>>> context-dependent). >>>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>> -- >>>>>>>>>> Professor Luc Moreau >>>>>>>>>> Electronics and Computer Science tel: +44 23 8059 4487 >>>>>>>>>> University of Southampton fax: +44 23 8059 2865 >>>>>>>>>> Southampton SO17 1BJ email:l.moreau@ecs.soton.ac.uk >>>>>>>>>> United Kingdomhttp://www.ecs.soton.ac.uk/~lavm >>>>>>>>>> >>>> -- >>>> Professor Luc Moreau >>>> Electronics and Computer Science tel: +44 23 8059 4487 >>>> University of Southampton fax: +44 23 8059 2865 >>>> Southampton SO17 1BJ email: l.moreau@ecs.soton.ac.uk >>>> United Kingdom http://www.ecs.soton.ac.uk/~lavm >>>> >>>> >>>> >> -- Professor Luc Moreau Electronics and Computer Science tel: +44 23 8059 4487 University of Southampton fax: +44 23 8059 2865 Southampton SO17 1BJ email: l.moreau@ecs.soton.ac.uk United Kingdom http://www.ecs.soton.ac.uk/~lavm
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