- From: Phil Archer <phila@w3.org>
- Date: Thu, 12 Dec 2013 14:03:15 +0000
- To: Bernadette Hyland <bhyland@3roundstones.com>
- CC: Public GLD WG <public-gld-wg@w3.org>
If you're editing it now... In section 11 on URI Construction there's a link to Hans Overbeek's submission for the ODW workshop in April called Draft URI Strategy for the NL Public Sector. Can you please change the link to http://www.pilod.nl/wiki/Bestand:D1-2013-09-19_Towards_a_NL_URI_Strategy.pdf I just checked with Hans and he tells me that the link here is more up to date. Ta Phil. On 12/12/2013 13:38, Bernadette Hyland wrote: > Thank you Phil. I agree with those changes & appreciate you rolling up your sleeves and just getting it done before today's final GLD WG call. > > - simplified English spelling to US-style throughout; > > ^^ This bit must have been hard for you mate, sorry! ;-) > > I'm putting in some final updates now myself. > > Cheers, > Bernadette > > On Dec 12, 2013, at 8:34 AM, Phil Archer <phila@w3.org> wrote: > >> Ahead of today's meeting I've read through the document as it was at 11:00 GMT. >> >> One thing that struck me as a native speaker was that the language needed a but of polish here and there (this is not a criticism!) and looking in more detail at some aspects there were one or two W3C-style things that needed fixing too. So rather than give Ghis, Boris and Bernadette a long list I've made the changes directly. >> >> Main changes: >> - all target="_blank" attributes removed from hyperlinks; >> - removed conformance boilerplate and made all references informative - this is a Note, not a Rec so nothing is normative; >> - all shortened URIs replaced by target URI; >> - simplified English spelling to US-style throughout; >> - replaced data set with dataset throughout (I have no strong view but a quick survey on Twitter today suggests that the preference is to spell it without a space); >> - generally tidied up a few awkward bits of sentence construction. >> >> There are a few (I think 3) instances of <del>...</del>. These indicate my preference/view rather than a policy or English language norm - i.e. WG consensus is needed to make the changes (I can talk about them on the call later). >> >> I do not claim that the doc is now error free, but the number of typos etc should be less than it was. >> >> HTH >> >> Phil. >> >> -- >> >> >> Phil Archer >> W3C Data Activity Lead >> http://www.w3.org/2013/data/ >> >> http://philarcher.org >> +44 (0)7887 767755 >> @philarcher1 >> > > -- Phil Archer W3C Data Activity Lead http://www.w3.org/2013/data/ http://philarcher.org +44 (0)7887 767755 @philarcher1
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