- From: Ghislain Atemezing <auguste.atemezing@eurecom.fr>
- Date: Thu, 12 Dec 2013 14:50:49 +0100
- To: Phil Archer <phila@w3.org>
- CC: Public GLD WG <public-gld-wg@w3.org>
Hi Phil, > One thing that struck me as a native speaker was that the language > needed a but of polish here and there (this is not a criticism!) ["He has a right to criticize, who has a heart to help."( A. Lincoln) ] and > looking in more detail at some aspects there were one or two W3C-style > things that needed fixing too. So rather than give Ghis, Boris and > Bernadette a long list I've made the changes directly. Thanks!! Ghislain -- Ghislain Atemezing EURECOM, Multimedia Communications Department Campus SophiaTech 450, route des Chappes, 06410 Biot, France. e-mail: auguste.atemezing@eurecom.fr & ghislain.atemezing@gmail.com Tel: +33 (0)4 - 9300 8178 Fax: +33 (0)4 - 9000 8200 Web: http://www.eurecom.fr/~atemezin Google+:http://google.com/+GhislainATEMEZING Twitter:@gatemezing
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