Re: diffs for review -- wasFwd: How People with Disabilities Use the Web - stories of web users ready for review

[sorry, I responded to the wrong email with this statement yesterday. Was
doing two things at once  :) ]

This is great to have. Thanks for sending the link.

Of course this will only help if they have a draft version in GitHub and
have the link to the mockup of it.



Brent A. Bakken
Director, Accessibility Strategy & Education Services
Pearson

512 202 1087
brent.bakken@pearson.com

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On Mon, Sep 25, 2017 at 1:33 PM, Shawn Henry <shawn@w3.org> wrote:

> Hi Brent & Sharron,
>
> I suggest that Editors provide diff versions for most edits. That way
> reviewers can choose to focus on the revisions, and not spend much energy
> on the content that didn't change, if they don't want to.
>
> Anyone can create diffs of HTML files from this:
>         http://services.w3.org/htmldiff
>
> Editors could also provide diffs in Word.
>
> If you agree, would you communicate to Editors -- and add to the
> appropriate section(s) under <https://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/wik
> i/EOWG_Participation_Info#Editing_and_Review_Teams>
>
> Otherwise, happy to talk about it at so-plan on Wed. :-)
>
> ~Shawn
>
>
> -------- Forwarded Message --------
> Subject:        How People with Disabilities Use the Web - stories of web
> users ready for review
> Resent-Date:    Fri, 22 Sep 2017 18:09:47 +0000
> Resent-From:    w3c-wai-eo@w3.org
> Date:   Fri, 22 Sep 2017 18:09:17 +0000
> From:   Sinclair, Norah M <norah.sinclair@amac.gatech.edu>
> To:     Sharron Rush <srush@knowbility.org>, jgreen@visa.com <
> jgreen@visa.com>, shawn@w3.org <shawn@w3.org>, Pulido, Jesus <
> jesus.pulido@amac.gatech.edu>
> CC:     shadi@w3.org <shadi@w3.org>, Sylvie Duchateau <
> sylvie.duchateau@snv.jussieu.fr>, Bakken, Brent <brent.bakken@pearson.com>,
> EOWG (E-mail) <w3c-wai-eo@w3.org>
>
>
>
> Hello Review Team,
>
> Draft revisions of stories of web users are ready for your review
> and feedback. This resource is the main focus for update of the larger “How
> People with Disabilities Use the Web.”
>
> The goals of the revisions are to:
> • Simplify & Tersify — Make content simple and brief. Cut words. Cut
> Sentences.
> • Bullets & Graphics — Break up passages into bullets when appropriate.
> Suggest graphics.
> • Front-loaded Action — Use active voice, and action statements.
>
> Drafts are posted on github Revised web stories <
> https://github.com/w3c/wai-people-use-web/issues/51>
>
> Please provide your feedback and suggestions by Monday Oct. 2^nd by
> commenting on the github issue (preferred) or by email. The titles have not
> been changed other than using a first name, but may need to be changed.
> Thanks so much for your assistance with this.
>
> Regards,
> Norah
>
>
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> **
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